This is one of the best Narnia stories I've ever read! I love it! Inter-species romance has always been an interest of mine, and you have made the perfect story, I couldn't stop reading it! Please write another one soon!! Please! And try using the spell and grammar check a little more often, not to be rude, just wanted to point that out.

This is great! I've taken a liking to Oreius these days. Tumnus will always be number one, but Oreius comes in at a strong number two! Superb work on this!

are you ever going to update? its a great story, why waste its potential?

Please continue this fanfiction... I am very curious about the ending or following just please give any sign that you will continue writing this story. This is so good. Please... update if you can and very soon...
DemonGirly91

I love your story. Please continue it.

Thank you so much for this story...i hadn't thought of a pairing like that...and it works out quite well, Susan the Gentle, and Oreius the "Strong and Brave, and stoic" guy. I hope to see more chapters soon. LOL Although, When Edmund came in...i was like..."Crap" was the only word in my mind. Thanks!
Tammy

And why isn't this finished?!
YEs, I know they will end up marrying and having twin boys, but still, I really wanna read about how they got to that point, and you haven't written anything at all in more than two years!
Abou the group, I would very much like that, I love Susan, and I think she and Oreius make an amazing couple.
Please, have mercy on me and on the rest of your leaders and update this (I would hope sooner rather than later...)

Wow I really love this story! :) I never even thought about this pairing and now I LOVE it! I hope you update soon, can't wait for the next chapter. :D

loved i!

I am so sorry I don't think you mean it but between king Livonia and the land of Novi I am beginning to think I am back home in Plymouth . . . .

thus keeping a straight face is a bit hard for these bits but keep up!

I like this story really... Please update soon please, please, please... It is really good... Cute smile :) Please. :):):):):):):):):):)

I LOVE IT!! THIS PAIRING IS AMAZING!! PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!

I love this story!! PLEASE update soon!! There are virtually no stores of this pairing out there...(I'm not even sure if there are any)... but I think it's a good one! Do you happen to know of any other stories that have this pairing or something close to it?? :D

Snap!! Chapter one and I'm already hooked!! *runs off to read the other chapters* OH! *comes running back* Excellent job by the way! *runs away again*

I really enjoyed this fanfic. I like the Susan and Oreius pairing. I was a bit skeptical of it at first, but you pulled it together really nicely. I was wondering if this was going to have more chapters to it or are you stopping? Thanks again, and keep up the good work!