 five letter word 2009-07-28 . chapter 1 sorry this isn't logged in, lmao.
i also wanted to say that you did a great job potraying ginny.
she's my favorite character :) |
 five letter word 2009-07-28 . chapter 1i liked this story very much :)
great job! |
 lilyre 2009-03-27 . chapter 1That was hilariously cute. I loved the 'hypothetical.' I liked little Lizzie |
 Aimael 2008-01-06 . chapter 1Really good! It made me laugh =P Especially Luna's comment "I thought it was about you and R-", it was hilarious. The thing with the toilets was brilliant as well. Goes to favs!
Aimael |
 The Lady Elizabeth 2007-04-11 . chapter 1That was really nice. Everyone was in character and I love fics that show that Hermione is capable of having girlfriends. Obviously, Harry and Ron are her best friends, but it's nice to see her interacting with other girls like this. Thumbs up! |
 Moonprincess92 2007-03-23 . chapter 1I really liked that. It was funny and sweet. Lizzie seems so sweet and innocent. I loved this story so so much (Specialy the R/Hr. Of course we're talking hypotheticaly (sp?).) |
 Will/Elizabeth F-O-R-E-V-E-R 2006-07-26 . chapter 1 Oh my God. That was SO CUTE.Won-Won and Hermy are so perfect for each other(hypothetical ofcourse(winks)). |
 nundu 2006-06-10 . chapter 1 This little story is an absolute delight! I'm so glad I followed your link from the SugarQuill! |
 Stephanie 2006-05-14 . chapter 1 That was lovely. I loved the Anne of Green Gables reference. Could Lizzie perhaps be a decendant of Anne and Gilbert? |
 Alex202 2006-05-13 . chapter 1I have read this story, as well as circular reasonings, and I rather enjoy all of them. This one, having more humor than the other two may be my favorite thus far. I really hope you keep writing, because I have enjoyed it oh so much.
P.S. You have anonymous reviews disabled. |
 Wryn Flynt 2006-05-06 . chapter 1lol That was so cute! Especially Ginny's "hypothetical" situation. Cute OC too! |
 Dead-Luthien 2006-04-30 . chapter 1really sweet and funny. I love it. Ginny's answer is so tipically her. If a boy bothers you: just hex him. |
 Dudette13 2006-04-29 . chapter 1Haha, that was so good! It was totally believable, too - Hermione was completley in character (something which nearly no one ever does). Anyway, fantastic fic! Keep writing! |
 Ejays17 2006-04-27 . chapter 1I followed the link from SQ. I liked this, it was humourous. Ginny's hypothetical story to cheer the little girl up was a good way of teasing Hermione without making a big song-and-dance about it. And her suggstion that the best way to deal with an annoying boy is to hex him because that's what she did to her brothers is very Ginny-like.
And having each of the girls sharing a similar experience in first year is true as well about not fitting in or having no friends. |
 claymade 2006-04-26 . chapter 1Very nice... Everyone's well in character, and there are some truly fun moments of interaction.
In terms of suggestions, the choice of the insult--"Carrots"--in that exact setup, just gave me strong flashes of Anne of Green Gables, which was a somewhat odd juxaposition to have suddenly come up in the middle of a Harry Potter fic. You might want to consider having that one part be related a little differently, so as not to evoke other fictional worlds.
Other than that, though, I really enjoyed reading the fic! Excellent work on this! |