That is very very good. I really like it and I can't wait for more.
SG

This chapter read like a very good novel. It drew me in and I was surprised to see the bottom of the page. I missed most of the old series when the repeats were shown so it's good to get some background on Romana and Ace. I hope this isn't the final chapter, I'm really enjoying the story so far and I'd love to see more of Ace. The idea of the Doctor and Rose sharing a bed platonically seems to be a very common one in fanfiction, but somehow it just fits here. Well done, and please continue!
lase

Whoops! double post! I guess this means I have double the love of this story.

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Really good story. I will second the comment that the banter between Rose and the Doctor is spot on. I can't wait to see what happens next.

*She stared at him. "Seriously? The master?"

He nodded once. "Yup."

"D'you all use titles instead of names?" she asked incredulously.

He grinned at her. "Only the bad ones."*

Brilliant, absolutely brilliant! And I was right, it was Ace! Now, the only questions are, how did she wind up on Gallifrey and what's up with Fred's TARDIS? Hope to have answers ssoon ;-)

What's not supposed to happen? come on please tell!
Ok childish moment over, I love this story please update ASAP

Really good. the banter between Rose and the Doctor is so in-character (which some fanfic writers are impossible at) and the plot is really interesting.

Liking your story so I just want to say there had better be another chapter because that looked way too much like a cliff hanger to me. Please can I have another chapter soon? Pretty please?
And who is the girl? My guess would be one of his companions, maybe Romana or Susan?

V. well, written and intriguing!

Am dying to find out about the girl - sounds a bit like Ace, but really can't be . . .
Do carry on!

Very good; well done! Looking forward to the next chapter.