 Dragonluvr1993 2008-09-21 . chapter 1This was very well written, I have to say. Why would anyone flame this? I like the random-ness of the conversations at times. If you write anymore stories like this, add a bunch of that to it. :3
Lots of dragon-y love (and cookies!),
~DL ('Dragon Lover') |
 The Mad Empty Shell 2007-10-11 . chapter 1I LOVED this fic, and I think you achieved your goal!
"The way I based Axel was the way I saw him when he was interacting with Roxas in the infamous flashback (“I would miss you”). We see a much softer Axel and so I brought that out a bit especially because he had his guard down. I did not, however, neglect **!Axel, as you can see from the beginning and end bits."
Totally. Roxas is, like, so COOL-y portrayed in this fic - OOC in terms of Out Of the Character other authors give him.
Good job! |
 SaruKaze 2007-08-30 . chapter 1it was occ. but who gives a flying **. this was one of the best stories I ever read
GOOD JOB
^__^ |
 Meat Curtain 2007-08-11 . chapter 1 8< *sprays milk all over fanfiction, in search of Roxas* |
 manga-ghost 2007-03-11 . chapter 1...
This was amazing! I absolutely loved this. ^^ And I think that your Axel was very in chracter - I'm one of the school of that Axel-would-have-his-guard-down-more-around-Roxas group. ^^
So! In conclusion, I really really loved this! (And self-cleaning carpets = love. ^^) |
 a.n.g.e.l. 2007-01-10 . chapter 1 I like your Axel/Roxas stories. You claim that your Axel is OOC, but I don't really see it. He likes to have a little (possibly malicious) fun, doing things like burning Larxene's hair (LOL!). Okay. If he's a bit silly, that's fine; he's been drinking. He seems pretty in character to me.
I liked the way you wrote their friendship here. Bonding over alcohol. Ah, how nice. |
 SetsuntaMew 2006-11-13 . chapter 1You are way too talented; this is wonderful! I love it :D |
 Harmonius blow 2006-08-24 . chapter 1 Um...I think, personally, that Axel was perfectly in character. It was cute! :3 |
 AliVal13 2006-08-04 . chapter 1Heheheheheh. I've read this story quite a few times before, but I alays forgot to review. O_o Anywho, I love this story! Its freakin' adorable, in my opinion. :P |
 pellegrinopixie 2006-07-28 . chapter 1I must say i enjoyed this story very much. As long as i thought about all of the 'interesting' pairings for KH i never brought it upon myself to read them. Now i did and i am very glad i did so. Yours is the best so far...drunkness always gives it a million points so therefore you win by default. ^^
Loved it faved it will be sure to read it agian
Marisa |
 runtus maximus 2006-07-15 . chapter 1I really enjoyed this; it made me giggle. :D A lot. |
 balfonheim 2006-05-19 . chapter 1Ahaha. This was very entertaining. I really liked your characterization of Axel, both **!Axel and Sorta-nice!Axel. I would've liked slightly more... umm... "action" XDD But that's okay, I'll live. Looking forward to reading your next Akuroku! |
 Kingess 2006-05-16 . chapter 1You know, this is probably one of the best Axel/Roxas fics I've ever read. Maybe even just one of the best Kingdom Hearts fics.
It was really amazing.
...and I have nothing else to say. You've left me speechless.
=) |
 an-obscure-flaw 2006-05-12 . chapter 1I had added this to my favorites but I realized that I never reviewed! This is probably the best Axel/Roxas I've read. I dont know, it just all seems so believeable. The idea is great, it just seems like something that they would do. Great story! I really enjoyed it. |
 lackofsweet 2006-05-11 . chapter 1I loved both this and your other KH fic. I hope you'll write more. |