PLEASE! MORE I HAVE TO KNOW WHAT HAPENS! :) Great job you are a terrific writer!

holy.. that was realy good ;)

very good... at least russell is dead.

Wow. That was an intense well-written story with a thick well thought-out plot. You almost feel sorry for Russel until you remember that he's a deranged psychotic rapist. I also read your disclaimer; isn't it nice to say that you own nothing but the rapist in your stories? I know the feeling.

Once again, very well-written, powerful, and frighteningly descriptive in detail. Well done. I look forward to reading the epilogue.

wow great story

dark yet deep at the same time

and is that really how saras dad died i never knew

i love it

i can't wait for the epilogue

maybe is because i just came from work, and I'm tired, but this chapter was to cruel to Sara for me. she went through enough, plus there were other things the guy could have done like what happened to grissom i agree with. it was something interesting to create plot but grissom did not have to go through her getting raped in front of him. an attempt of rape would have been more than enough while he got the gun.

Can't wait for the epilogue

dont end it please dont please cotinue its a good very story

please write a sequel! It's such a great story! And I cn't bear to think of what could happen - I have a very imaginative mind and I hate endings like that! OS please please please write a sequel! The fic is so great! :)

It was just a creepy as I remembered. You done good girl. Maybe a little sequel is in order? What happens to Grissom?

no! Please write the next chappie soon! I'm very bad with suspense...*bites nails*..

GAH THE SUSPENSE IS KILLING ME UPDATE SOON PLEAZE!

i really like this story

please update soon

I really like this story and where it's going. I hope you update soon. Nice start. :]