I'm not sure I agree about this being "creepy", but it is certainly odd, and kinda weird. I like it, though. Even though I'm not sure I understand (although it's probably just a lack of X-culture on my part), it's very, very nicely written. I like how it flows; I could hear the words as I read them. It's short, too, but it's part of the form, and making it longer would have been too much. Very nice little piece of writing, me thinks.

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