Pretty intense story, it's complete though... so is that it? On a cliffy? You leave us on a cliffy?!?!?! Hahaha, good story though so far - or well good story in general, kinda creepy obsession that Jyou has but then again Jyou like loves her so nothing is really creepy in the name of love (kinda sappy but its the truth!)

Thanks for commenting on my story! ^_^

Peace!

_Pellucid Otiose_

This was pretty good, nice characterization going on :)
Though the last line was a bit of a let down. "Oh well, he thought". :/ Looking at Joe's attitude in the series', I think it'd be much better if he panicked in the end.

But why don't you use real English in your summaries?
It's make them a lot easier to read.

This was... Surprisingly good. Please, tell me you're improving.

Ha, I...think it was weird.

Joe? With Sora? I never like that pairing...

This is almost as bad as my Digimon one!

Story Score: 7.3/10

Alright, your story has some issues. First of all, the summary had little to do with your story, and it was full of incomprehensible spelling errors. In the story itself, I noticed right off the bat this 'word' here: "tallshort." Is this an oxymoron I'm not aware of? :P. Aside from some more grammar and page formatting errors, I couldn't help but notice that Joe's behavior was slightly stalker-ish. The drawings are alright...maybe, but the collection of hair bothers me (Does Sora shed?) In your next chapter, please correct these issues. I know your story can be better if you just work a little harder on the basics. Good luck! :)

joe skipped to maths? skn! but da fic is kwl doe. thanx for commenting on my story

hol' tight
holla bk

i thought ii that it was horable tiaora for ever

oh,joe.he is a dork in these situations...thanks 4 reveiwing my story,returning kindness...*shrugs*
~juri

I'll take an appereant leaf out of you book and say this . . .'Jyoura succs dicc!'

awesome fic, so you've got a new pen name. I'm wise to you, LOL! At least I think...

Nice fic Savoan, even though I'm not much of a Jyoura fan.

This is so cute! I loved how Joe skipped class just to think about Sora. By the way, since you mentioned Matt, is he Sora's boyfriend? That would bring more complications for Joe but it would be interesting! Keep up the good work.