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| uNxLaBeLeD 2008-05-05 ch 22, | abuseOkay, there is no word even invented, not even all the awesome cool words combined, that can describe this indescribable story. I love it so much! I wish to read more if you will write more. Ever since the second page, I have been reading this story every day after I have completed my work in computer class. Ever since the first page I have wanted to review. I also envy your writing ability. One day, I wish to be able to write in the way you have put so many ideas into your stories without using dialog to explain to your readers what it is like in the lives of the Halliwell youngsters. Anyway, thank you for contributing so many delightful chapters to us readers. With lots of love, Payton B. Halliwell |
| LizMaxforever 2008-01-16 ch 5, | abusevery good |
| Hinata-hime 2007-09-26 ch 22, | abuseI told you to be patient...I would get around to reviewing eventually. (I took time out of my busy schedule for this! woo.) Anyway. I'm glad Prue got the camera she wanted. I want a guy that would give me stuffs like that T.T le sadness. oh well w/e. And well, I guess you were right about me thinking it was a dream (even though it's not?) I'll look forward to how you explain that in the later chapters. But isn't it funny? You're almost the same age as Prue now. Oh yes, you are getting old. Though we all are. XD Anyway, like I said before, good chapter! And keep writing! |
| CharmedOneForever 2007-09-22 ch 22, | abuseAmazing story! I'm so glad you updated :) I'm still loving this story as much now as I did when I read the first chapter. Update soon! |
| Laby Anne Boleyn 2007-09-20 ch 22, | abuseI can sum this up in one word... Brilliant! |
| danielle503 2007-06-23 ch 21, | abusegreat chapter ,cant wait till next chapter,updated soon |
| Hinata-hime 2007-06-20 ch 21, | abuseTada! It's me reviewing again. Anyway, this was an interesting chapter to read. You know, with our SAC elections just happening. And Piper is right, it basically is a popularity contest. Though, she must be careful what she wishes for right? Now she got people to notice her. Maybe she wanted something in between. Though, as you say, life isn't all rainbows and puppies (rather thunderstorms and the sadistic dentist that kills the puppies). Though, it was nice that her sister came to her rescue. But again, Piper was right: having someone do that is almost just as humiliating. Though, it showed the sisterly bond. Don't you wish you had that bond? You just ignore your sisters. *sighs* Maybe you could learn from the sisters' examples! I dont know which one you'd be...hmm. Maybe if I watched the show I'd have a better idea. Kay. Now I'm rambling. If you can't tell, I did like the chapter. Yup yup. And I'm reviewer 160! That's a special number. Anyway, keep up the great work. Write more and update soon. |
| CharmedOneForever 2007-06-17 ch 21, | abuseHey! You made it past the '150' mark, congratulations! =) Fantastic chapter as always, I felt very sorry for Piper. Update soon! |
| Kirky123 2007-06-16 ch 1, | abuseGreat story, looking forward to the next chapters hopefully they will have more Paige in them Update soon please :) |
| wiccanforever 2007-06-15 ch 21, | abuseI would never say this, but PIper should have said: "Hello, I am Piper Halliwell, and I know that these student council elections are basically popularity contests. I want to say that I don't care! I actually want to be secretary because I'm qualified for this position, and I don't care what people think of me!" That might not have worked, but I like it. UPDATE SOON! |
| wiccanforever 2007-06-04 ch 20, | abuseThis is a story that deserves a zillion reviews, so please update! I LOVE LOVE LOVE this story! UPDATE ASAP! |
| beautifuldreamer001 2007-05-30 ch 20, anon. | abusewow this is really good. the characters in your story really do seem like the ones in the show! ~Abby~ |
| Hinata-hime 2007-05-29 ch 20, | abuseYay chapter! (You can relax now, cuz I'm reviewing). Poor Piper. Still invisible as always. Though I was a little confused (maybe its because I don't watch the show). Why was Leo there? I'm sure he has an importance for being there, but yeah. Didn't make a whole lot of sense to me. Maybe as I read on I'll understand. And you know, smile. You made it past 150 =D So keep writing, keep updating. I'll try to as well. I'm about halfway done my chapter anyway, so yeah. Have fun with House. (I like Chase! He can't be fired!) |
| danielle503 2007-05-27 ch 20, | abusegreat chapter.i feel so bad for piper.updated soon |
| CharmedOneForever 2007-05-26 ch 20, | abuseDon't worry about it when you don't get many reviews, just concentrate on the people who do review. I LOVE your story, and I loved this chapter so please don't give up on it just because of a temporary review drought, update soon! |