i like the story you give a nice beginning but a little clice in the end. no ofense. i thought harry gonna cry when he killed his father and the other see it. after all they are father and son. there is some bound that cannot be gone. coz no matter how evil voldemort is, he still loves harry.
well, that's all i thought.
1 question, are harry gonna be an auror?

hey,
i just finished reading your whole story, i must say W-O-W
you are an amazing writer!

i've supost to have been studing for my School Certificate which is next Monday and goes for three days and mum and dad are always like "what are you doing?" and i go "studing". but i just couldnt stop reading your story! your chapters are intens!!

i loved Draco in the last chapter. i love Draco fullstop. i think you made his character very loyal to harry. i liked it.

Damy was a cutie lol. i actually cried a little in the chapter when Harry leaves and says goodbye, when Damy is about to floo and he waves sorta at harry, so cute and sad. and when he is almost killed.

i cant wait to read the other storys on your site. i will get on to reading them when i've finished writing your much deserved review.

i absoultly loved it!!

Asha.xoxo

This story is amazing, I don't think i've ever felt sorry for bellatrix before. Your DarkHarry is incredible, and so realisitic. Loved the story, reading the sequels now!

plz do a sequel!

HELLO KURINOONE!

Ops... I think i was... too much happy.

Okay. Lest's do it.

I'm Mariana, and I live in Brazil. I'm TERRIBLE in inglish, so, sorry for my... hm... I don't no the name =D

So... I just wanna say... I LOVE YOUR FIC!

Yeah, that's obvious o.O

Well... I read the brazillian version (it's almost over!) from Fabrielle, and I love it!

I really hope she translate the senquences. That history is like chocolate to me. I can live without!


So... I'm stop. Yeah. Really.

I really hope you... understund that messege =)

I suck in english u-u


But... Kisses!!

Mari. =)

Hey Kurinoone,

Okay, I finally got the time to read this story -bangs head against screen- I’ve been so busy with finals, test, homework, work, my own stories, betaing, the Naruto fandom and life in general that I’ve barely had time to do anything fun , but . . . well . . . I’ve been writing on my own fictions of course – as I mentioned – because they’ve been my top priority, hehe xD Anyway! I’m here to leave a review, so that’s what you’re going to get! I hope you like long reviews; don’t know though -_-“

I loved reading this story! x3 It contained friendship, romance, love, family and the long, hard, sweaty, painful, opposite-to-enjoyable way for a great relationship within a family xD I’m a weird person, but I simply loved this story! I’ve got to say that I actually have some critique (I love critique, really, because that means that the readers are taking their time reading my story, and then think about it before reviewing :3) to give you, good, bad and constructive, hmm?? So prepare yourself :3 At least I’m giving you a warning, huh?? xD I’ve got a lot of things to say though and I want you to know that nothing is meant to be felonious ;P Sometimes, I ramble and then all of a sudden, there’s this little sentence that’s not supposed to be there you know . . .-_-“

OKAY! It was a good being, the introduction was a bit different – (read the entire paragraph before arching a brow, ‘kay?? This will sound strange xD) it wasn’t from the very beginning with Harry being taken from his family, but it began ‘in the middle of everything’ or how you should put it, it all began with how they felt for their son who wasn’t there. James and Lily have got a second kid ( I freaking LOVE Damien! O.O) and it kind of made all of this more interesting and professional looking ;P (I’ve noticed that you’ve got some years on your back, so you’ve had a lot of time training as well xP) Now you can arch your brows, but there’s an explanation as to why I said the above: we didn’t get to know if Harry died or not in the first chapter, and it made the entire story start in a completely different way, and I like that. It’s as if the first chapter never existed, and you (as a reader) get thrown into a life where a lot of things have happened and you don’t know what. I suck at explaining, sorry -_-“ But . . . well . . . let’s just say that I didn’t feel as if the abduction ever happened . . . or something . . . with other words; you’re one awesome author/authoress.
Something else that was good with the story is that we’ve actually got James and Lily running around all over in the place! xD They bring a certain tension to the matter and the fact that they’re actually alive made me smile so much. I love stories where they are alive, and I’d love you as well if you know some good stories with them as Harry and tell me about them xP I’m pretty new when it comes to the Harry Potter fanfiction reading, so I don’t know that many stories, I’ve read – and known about – the Harry Potter books since I was around eight though ;]

Anyway! Got to evaluate the story now, since you put so much effort into writing this baby (big baby you’ve got O.O) Maybe I should start with the . . . bad things?? O.o Er . . . it’s not exactly something bad you know; your OOCness. Hmm . . . I’m going to give you some personal thoughts concerning this; I really hate OOCness when you can’t write it correctly, give the people a background that’s believable and fits with the story is good, instead of the times when their wicked personalities simply pop out of nowhere because you need a person to act like this and that . . . I hate them so much sometimes . . . it kind of takes away the feeling you get when reading something that’s got to do with Harry Potter (if could be Bleach, Naruto or the Lord of the Rings for all I care, but you get it) Personally I use as few OCs as possible as well as adding OOCness into a story.

BUT! Now to the amazing this about said OOCness; the OOCness you’ve got here fits the story like a glove on your hand, instead of that ** crap I’ve come across out there, and damn . . . do you know how jealous I am?? I want to be able to write this well! :S –tried to gore eyes out- The OOCness I love in this story though; it’s Harry’s personality. (Daimon’s not OOC since he’s your character, but about his personality; **! That little hyper ball disguised as a teenager is running around all over the place and makes my day happier than happiest. I love the man . . . xD) another OOCness I like is Bellatrix’, she’s an amazing character in this story, and it made my heart shatter into a million pieces when she was given the Kiss . . . I was so ** at you for that moment, I nearly sent you a Howler! X_x (Excuse my idiocy xD)
I’m desperately trying to not sound mean here, btw! O.O I hope you understand! –cries- TT_TT I still love the guys, AND their personalities! –begs on knees- But back on track then! Er . . . this may sound strange, but what the heck . . . -_-“

One of the things that bothered me the most; all of the people around Harry (James’ and Lily’s friends, Damien and his friends etc.) could accept the fact that Harry was actually there quite easily. Especially Lily. I know that it’s hard to write emotion after emotion in fictions, and stories in general, but I can see that you’re giving it your best when it comes to writing this story, so I think you can take this :] (I’m not trying to be mean) It’s something that most of the fanfiction here at FFN’s got – they accept things too well, too fast! O.O I know that when you’ve got really, really awesome friends they can accept nearly everything about you and that are friends you should cherish with all of your heart, but this is the fiction world – the Harry Potter world to top it all off – so yeah, things are different . . . :]
Something I most certainly did (and still do) not like, is that Harry fancy Ginny. I can’t stand that couple actually, it made me a bit disappointed when J.K. Rowling decided to let Harry be with Ginny. I’ve got nothing against her, and she’s a great person, but I can see them in a relationship; only as friends, and maybe they can act like a brother and sister. I think there was a ‘HG’ in the summery, and I thought it was Hermione Granger you meant at first, but then I forgot all about it, and then (in the epilogue) I slapped myself mentally for being so stupid. It mean Harry x Ginny –sigh- enough of my rambling now . . .

. . . AND TO THE AWESOME THINGS! xD

You’re simply awesome with grammar, spelling, capitalization, details, descriptions, emotions, keeping the characters quite IC, realistic writing and to keep a good length of the chapters as well as for the story itself :D (Your punctuation ability might need some help though, it’s not much, but I noticed a lot of errors -_-“) I tend to write too much when writing a story, but when I read this, I realised that I rather wrote too little:S Anyway! Something else that I liked was that that it took nearly the entire story for Harry and his family to get together, normally they get together after half the story and then we get to see some of their relationship and how it develops, not ion this story though ;P In this story we get to imagine the continuation of their lives ourselves :D THAT’S SO AWEOSME! -glomp- (haven’t read the sequel yet, so ignore my idiocy, once again xD) OH! And I simply love this whole thing with Harry accepting the Potters as his family etc. and then they got together fifteen years later, it’s something that’s a “only one of its kind” thingy, but I never tend to get tired of surprising and original things in fanfictions, which is pretty good, hehe :D

Something else that I liked was the emotions and the way you kind of built up the tension for the climax xD i.e. the downfall of Voldemort! :3 Speaking of that . . . the specific scene where they figth Voldemort for the last time was really well written, because you didn’t write everything that was going on, like . . . when James managed to penetrate one of the Death Eaters with a charm; it went from James acting and then there was barely even pain, there was nothing like “Oh my God, he’s killing me!?!?” It’s really, really, really hard to explain this, hehe! -_-“ Sorry about that, but what I’m trying to say is that you left some things for the imaginations, and it wasn’t all war, death, blood, magic, this story is only about that, if you understand what I mean?? O.o It’s was kept quite short and concrete.

A lot of stories her on FFN contains mostly blood and death, and sure; it’s cool as hell to read it, but too much is too much X_x Hehe . . . I’m impressed I said that . . . I’m a Harry Potter fan 24/7 and ask for fights all the time – written of course, hehe . . . -_-“

Anyway! My point with this review is to say that I loved it and I’m jealous over your writing skills – I’ve said id before and I can say it a thousand more times if I have to -_-“Oh, and I said I’ve also said before (I think); I can’t bring these kinds of emotions and realistic scenes into my stories, so DAMN! I’m RE~ALLY jealous here . . . –tries to come up with a plan on how to abduct your beautiful mind-


Well! Thank you for an awesome story! Kind of sad that it was so short though, but I’ll live ;P (Yeah, I said SHORT . . . I’ve read storied with about 100 chapters and they’re bloody awesome –drools- =W=) But . . . hehe . . . the sequels . . . –smirks-

Btw, I hate utterly HATE HarryGinny, as I said before, but damn I love this story xD

~mi

PS. You better like long reviews, I've worked my ** off to write this one -.-"

Wow!! i loved it!!
it's amazing
Thanks for writing =D

i'm your fan!!

I don't know why but the first time I got to this fic, I abandoned it before finishing chapter one. Seeing how popular it seems to be, I decided to give it another read. Loving it up to the end of chapter nine. You carry a caring Voldemort quite well except for when he lost it. Considering Harry's power, he shouldn't have but I guess it's understandable considering the outcome. Also, I can't get over how caring Voldemort is. Not even occassional harsh but understood crucios? Ah well. I guess that's how you wanted to use the character. Will continue reading later to see how it develops.

I stumbled upon this story and since I was bored, I began to read.
I also wasn't really that good on knowing a Dark!Harry but he doesn't seems that bad.
I cried during a lot of chapters especially when Harry was being tortured.
Your story is really amazing and I damn love it.
I never regret reading it.
Thank you for writing such a nice and wonderful story.(=

Well, i kow i haven't reviewed while i read, but my computer takes forever to load a page, so i figured i'd do my traditional thing of a long review at the end.

I'm not used to reading Dark!Harry fics, but this one was recommended to me by someone and they said that it was well written and had a very good ending, plus it's long (65 chapters) plus two more sequels! i couldn't say no to it! And despite not going for Dark!Harry i really enjoyed this! There was the perfect amount of drama and angst, yet touching parts, like the scene with James in Harry's room after discovering the tomb. Perfect! i also loved the relationship that blossomed between Damien and Harry. i knew right off the bat that it was Damien who would win Harry's heart and be Voldemort's downfall. I started crying when the killing curse hit Damien, i knew subconsciously that he was probably not dead, but my logic was that the Layhoo Jisteen pendant would protect him whether he was wearing it or not. At least that's the conclusion i kind of came too after learning about it. i am very excited about the sequel!

The only thing i could possibly find i didn't like, was that there was so much underage magic going on, like Ginny warming Harry's plate of food in the Burrow's guest apartment. it's very firm in canon wizarding rules that underage magic isn't allowed. i know your story didn't stick to canon so much as it followed the same patterns (Bill/Fleur, twins and joke shop, etc.) but you made your own universe. But you also basically stuck to most rules about magic, not in front of muggles, Ministry can track wand of underage kids, etc. That's mostly why i was a bit bothered by the excessive underage magic in this story.

Overall, i really liked this story, it's now one of my faves! Good things happen to those who try new things! 10/10 Outstanding!

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hello,
your story is so fantastic so far. nice plot.

im supost to be sleeping right now but i had to read this, it was interesting. you were sugest on chocedric 's page so i came and had a look.

your an amazing writer. hopefully ill finish this before i go back to school on monday.

really its an incredable story. lolz to Draco. so funny and he is really hot.

cant wait to finish reading this story, but mum will kill me if im in a bad mood tomoz cuz i havnt had enough sleep.
:)

Asha.xoxo

This scene really sounds like a scene right out of the Terminators! keep up the good work!

Wow...yep thats it...not really into romamce but u had it all...the climax...the back-story actions follwed up by reasons for them...but i dun get that the jayhoo listeen was fake and voldemort took it and thought it was real...i mean so many prtection charms shouldnt he have noticed?

Anywho...just small question but holy was this story EPIC

Wow...this is like the 10th time I'm rereading your story over the past years.
I must admit I never tire of it.
It is so well crafted that I can reread without getting bored.


Just to say that you have a fan here since many years ago and hopefully many to come!