 Chirisaa Tomoko 2009-09-24 . chapter 1Yo! Dude! When are you gonna seriously update this story!
Your first chapter is unbelievable that it's just too unbelievable!
You got so many reviews on the first chapter that it's amazing!!
Now, you don't want to make the story go to waste now do you?
Come on! It is amazing!! I so love their new personalities!!
All of them!! Kyaa~! (^_^)
Update soon! Please and thank you!! I LOVE IT!
-Chirisaa Tomoko-xoxo |
 x.BlackBloodBlossom 2009-09-01 . chapter 1Really, nicely written chapter.
The only thing I would change is the tense, it's kinda odd...it sounds weird with using the present tense then past and back again.
No offense.
Update soon!
-x.BlackBloodBlossom |
 umm... 2009-04-26 . chapter 1 MORE! PLZ! Thankz! :P |
 animeluva 2008-01-02 . chapter 1 hehe..funny so far but it rox so can u plz continue asap! make it turn romantic nd sweet in the end |
 JitterBugx 2007-11-29 . chapter 1Awesome job cant wait for the next chapter! |
 SnowCharms 2007-09-26 . chapter 1Now this will definitely be interesting...u should reread ur story carefully 2 correct any typos...u hv a few here n there...but not enough 2 discourage someone from reading ur fic...update! |
 XxHinata-LoverxX 2007-09-01 . chapter 1ned more lol seriously write more its awsome ^^ |
 breenarose 2007-08-06 . chapter 1I like the last name you gave Tenten. It's pretty. |
 Vampire-cutie18 2007-08-03 . chapter 1I wonder if the girls will pull a prnak on the boys |
 mikannatsume 2007-07-26 . chapter 1 i'm so sry,cause i'll go today on vacation.so i won't be able to review to you.so please don't mind me if i can't review the following chapters.GOMEN |
 mikannatsume 2007-07-13 . chapter 1 interessting!really!darn i hate cliffhangers!but whatever!so pleaase update soon! |
 Maki-Zushi 2007-07-08 . chapter 1Hey, this story is good! Please... Hurry up and continue! |
 christina 2007-06-28 . chapter 1 okay you rule I so love Tenten's response and I might have actually done that please write more soon |
 Mistress Yuki 2007-06-08 . chapter 1MOre please! |
 pocu 2007-06-04 . chapter 1love it. you should totally finish the story. i really like the idea. |