loved it who's it about what couple i mean?

That was a really really amazing poem i really really liked it, good writing keep it up

From Nyght(night)

So sweet...so cute...but so simple. Love it! Great job, write more, please!

WHO ARE THE CHARACTERS IN THE STORY?

YES! I can finally review! =D Anyways, I LOVE LOVE LOVE your poem!! And even though you didn't know how to seperate the stranzas, I still loved how you did it in a "Z"!! Uwahh!! This is a GREAT first poem!! =]

wow that was AWESOME! really awesome...

That was so beautiful.. *sniffs* You really must be a talented writer! Although I am too dense to figure out the people here, I'm guessing the girl is Tohru..? yay, now I need to go to your profile and see what your favorite pairing is.. ^_^

Heh heh, I just *wonder* who this poem is about, Tapioca. ;) Really pretty. I liked it - a lot. It was a story in its own; short, sweet, but it proves its point in a really adorable way. =)

Good job!

- Chaka

... aw,... It's very sweet, very simple. ^_^