Thisis a great fic! I loved it.

I LOVE IT!

*claps* Yay!! Beautiful! I could totally see it!!

you made my day happy!

Yeah, that was good...definately stellar! Have you noticed that in the show they are touching each other a lot more than in the beginning? He'll grab her to guide her out of a room...or she'll hold him back from nailing some guy or something? Maybe, they are hinting that something is going to happen...ahh, soon enough I suppose!

great story!

That was great. Very well-paced and clever dialogue, and a perfect build up of the tension. I really enjoyed reading it!

I hope you continue this story. Hope to see a new chapter soon.

Too cute. Loved your take on things.

Loved the line: "Superwoman though you may be, invincible you certainly are not.”

Great LINE!

~wolfmyjic~

Perfect, as always!

Oh...right...well, a couple hours more of that with Booth would do that, wouldn't it? I wouldnt' mind spending a few hours with soemone like him :p lol. Great work, loved it.

“Well geez Bones…man flies all the way down from D.C…what did you think…I came down to visit my friendly neighborhood Bokor?”

LOL, I kept waiting for her to make him explain this one-man that line would have been perfect!

Great job! A little Booth action would go a long way towards making me feel better, too!

it was nice

i absolutely loved it!! i thought you wrote the characters so well...i could actually see this playing out on screen! great job!! can't wait for more from you!

Very cute! I liked the interaction... but the present tense didn't feel right to me, and some of the dialogue seemed a bit out of character. Other than that, good.

Keep writing, I hope to see lots more from you!