Beautiful. I like how you stayed within Carth's character and gave Revan a bit of a twist on his own personality. :) Hope you come up with more! ^^

Quite a good story. I can totally imagine Carth thinking this. That's a credit to your talent and your insight in the knights of the old republic universe. You know what you're writing about and you do it really well. I don't get why you don't have more reviews, but then people often think a story is good but just can't be bothered to write a review. I know, I'm one of those people. This time I wanted to make an exception because I've been looking a long time for a story like this and thanks to you I found it. Keep writing (kotor, :)