I liked your story, so good! It was sad about Zack! but of course Clorith forever! good ending.

o.o!! OMG!! for a second there, i thought cloud actually did die. >.

W00t Wedge was in it! YAYAYAYAY!
Wedge rules, yay!

LEON! HE WAS IN HERE! Does Yuffie recognize him in the sequel? I can't remember if she said she did... Squiffie! YAY!
~Padfoot

nice.

Aw you don't like Tifa. I think she's okay but I like Aeris more. It's an interesting idea but how will it end? Hmm I guess I'll have to find out. >.

And so a great story has ended. Garret getting the last word...awesome. I expect great things from you. If you're making anymore fics I'll be happy to read, k?

Aw happy endings are the best! lol. Ooh are you go to do more Cloriths? Well even if its not that pairing I'm sure whatever story you do next will be awesome!
I loved this story though!

ZACK! *cries a lot* Not AGAIN! *cries buckets*

I liked the ending. I so thought Brandon was going to die. That would have been something. But then Laura would have been miserable because Cloud and Zack would have been dead.

I think you got Zack's personality perfect. Secret Service? Awesome! Totally worth waiting for the end.

Li

great fic. nice ending.

PS please read/review my fic.

the ending could have been better. but good none the less.

aww it ended?! :(...ohh well, all good things have to end

But that was a very action-y ending...i mean poor Zack, he was in if for barely two chapters and that happened...ohh well, at least Brandon/Cloud was okk...BTW: i was so0o scared when Tiffany was listing the funerals...i thought that he died!! i cheered when he was talking to Laura/Aeris in the park (YAY for Aeris/Cloud...Laura/Brandon)

Loved the ending and loved the story :) pleasee write soon

no no no, I didnt say that i ment I didnt want them to die, It was late so I had no idea what I was typeing...:) IM SO SORRY anyways that was a great chapter

Aww that was sweet little Clorith moments in this chapter. But Cloud/Brandon better not die now!! This story is amazing! I love it!

i like this ^^ hope to see the update :D

woah, nvr expected something like this, in a good way