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Ice Dragon3 2008-07-01 . chapter 1
That certainly was an interesting and funny conversation to read about. :)
Deserter 2007-10-13 . chapter 1
Hahaha! That ending so caught me! Hilarious! The way they all turn to her XD And the AnBu guards laughing! Haha - awesome, I loved it!
chibified kitsunes 2007-09-01 . chapter 1
I couldn't help it. I HAD to click on this.
And it was just so damn hilarious to read. xD
You had me biting the edge of my shirt to keep from bursting out with laughter at the last line.
Awesome job.. Really, I loved it!
NarutoCraze 2007-03-13 . chapter 1
This was funny. Neat idea and it's definitely original!
Dark-Sky-of-Avalon 2007-02-08 . chapter 1
That was so damn funny! I'm still laughing at the fact that you threw in a concerned Orochimaru.
ChibiAliChan 2007-01-26 . chapter 1
ahahahahah... i can just see it now... orochimaru and a bunch of anbu squads scaling down the walls to break up the rave... orochimaru's face as he is yelling at iruka for lighting his favorite little ninja on fire... ahahahahah... you are such a genius...
Kirrow 2006-11-23 . chapter 1
Mwahaha! That is so good!
I love the ANBU guards, and the thing with the body shots, and Orohumaru was like 'what are you think youre doing lightning my student on fire', I could realy see that one in front off me.
I saw a few wrong spelings, but nothing bad, mostly you have just used the wrong words or put them in the wrong order.
Anyway, love this fanfic, hope there will be a seckound chapter.
Ya Ne!
Ktp14 2006-09-01 . chapter 1
HAHAHA!! you should continue this, its so funny!!
Byaku-Axel 2006-08-26 . chapter 1
Yep...OMG..So funny...Can't stop laughing!
kirallie 2006-07-24 . chapter 1
Quite the trouble makers that lot. What does MABU stand for in English?
Take Down 2006-06-29 . chapter 1
I wish I could have seen Orochimarus face excuse me while i roll on the floor while i die laughing.
happychica 2006-06-08 . chapter 1
But you can still blow up grapes...right?
Cuz that's the tradition that ends all back-to-school patires in my neighborhood.
Awesome story!!
:p
Guardian-Nightshade 2006-05-25 . chapter 1
that was great I loved it I can pictur orichimarus face
^.^
Crystal Blue Dry Ice 2006-05-21 . chapter 1
Hahahaha...I about died laughing as i read this. I love your other story, and this sure does explain a lot behind the parties. :D
chibinecco 2006-05-12 . chapter 1
*smirks* I already read this one when it was first referenced in the big fic i love it it's really funny the kids drunk are great ^.^

hah you think my oneshots are short? lol sorry just that's too funny i haven't posted it yet but i'm currently working on a oneshot that's at least 20 pages with three sex scenes hormones are crazy ^.^ and the 30kisses thing? The one i'm working on right now looks like it may end up being a good 10 pages itself i just can't write short stuff not that i mind i like writing the long things i just wish i could concentrate long enough to write them and get the time to work on them (can't wait to move out so i don't have to interact with that THING called familly *shudder* I know i should love them but they are so annoying (that and my brother just made me spend 45 minutes playing dominos with my grandma XD))
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