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Thunder S Silence
2009-07-13 . chapter 1
Very, surprisingly, sad. Just a downer, over-all, but that's good. It means you've succeeded. I liked the whole presentation of it, and the story itself ws interesting. Very enjoyable. Very sweet.
EmmBee
2009-06-08 . chapter 1
*sniffle* That was sad and lovely. I've never really thought about how Cinderella's friends would feel about her getting married to the prince.

I really like the fact that you don't give his name in the story; it accentuates the anonymity of the character.

Thank you for this wonderful little oneshot!

~EmmBee
always-dreaming-of-you
2008-12-19 . chapter 1
i really like this.i hope you add more. i think it would be a good story.
Univerasal Disaster
2008-10-21 . chapter 1
im crying!

T^T
HideSeekKeep
2008-05-14 . chapter 1
This was incredibly sad...but also very well done!

I didn't think I could ever imagine Cinderella ever being with someone other than the Prince but this story got me thinking.

Great job.
snowish
2008-05-04 . chapter 1
Oh my, I loved that. It was so sad, and now I have plots racing through my mind. Now you've made me want to write another Cinderella story. :)
Lady Knight Keladry
2008-03-21 . chapter 1
that was really sweet. i feel sorry for the woodworker, but at least he has found peace.
Intricacy
2008-03-04 . chapter 1
BAH
YOU HAVE GOT TO MAKE A SEQUEL TO THIS!

It was so brilliant, well-written... I love the ending, what with your comparsions. Great work.
random2one
2007-12-25 . chapter 1
That was so sad and cute. I just randomly found your story and read it. It was very captivating. Good job on it!
Ellen Jacee
2007-08-12 . chapter 1
Wow. This brought tears to my eyes. It was so captivating, and it's just one of those fairytales that doesn't happen that we can all relate to. Bravo. I'd talk more, but I think I've made myself clear.

Heartwrenching. This favorite stories list surfing thing is really working for me.

LN
FaylinnNorse
2007-08-04 . chapter 1
Ooh, I really love this! I know it's really old, but I just saw it and...wow! Its so sad but so romantic and sweet. Poor guy, he's so nice! He doesn't deserve this! I'm definitely putting this on my favs, it's really lovely. Awesome job!
shattered rainbow
2007-06-18 . chapter 1
that was incredibly sweet. I really liked it. You're a good writer. One thing I have to say I appreciate is that Cinderella wasn't blonde. Cinderella is always blonde, and I've gotten bored of it. There's nothing wrong with blonde princesses, but I liked the change of pace. Keep writing.
~the shattered rainbow
maritinkerbell
2007-06-17 . chapter 1
This is so sad! Really sweet, though. I feel so sorry for the wood-worker's apprentice! Poor guy.
JamSack
2007-06-04 . chapter 1
wow. that was such a cool story. sad, but I liked it! adds to *fav stories* I liked the comparison between the materialistic life the prince had to offer and the love and warmth that this guy offered. very nice.
ella plain and simple
2007-05-13 . chapter 1
This is so wonderfully sad and sweet! I really like it.
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