After reading the whole chapter, I realised that your English kind off sucks. (Sorry, I can't find any other words to say it.) The thing is, it interferes with the story. If you have a good grasp of the language then you can do anything, make your readers feel what you want them to feel, make your story sound more mysterious, etc, etc... Get a beta to proof read your stories or something. You keep on forgetting to put in full stops which gives the story an unfinished feeling.

Okay, now that that's out of the way, your story is INTERESTING! 7 alternate dimensions/worlds in 1! Cool idea! I was always thinking about something along those lines, you know like if Syaoran/Sakura didn't meet with SSakura/Syaoran, what would their lives be like?

And then I would think, "Oh, what if the canon characters from CCS were to go to that world and found out that their selves in that world didn't even meet each other yet!" And you have seven, SEVEN different worlds where something like that happened! And you COMPLETED the story already! (I just found your story. I just read Wildflower so I was looking for GOOD quality CCS fanfics but couldn't find any until I stumbled across yours!;D) I'm so happy! I don't have to wait for the next chapter to be updated! I can just read from the get go all at once!

Well, going of to read the rest of the story!

kawaiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii!

pls. make an sequel arigatouuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu!

Many years ago, I read this fanfic as I was just getting into CCS. I adored it then, and I still adore it now. Your story ideas are creative and your descriptions are very fluid. What strikes me most rereading this 9 years later and seeing the original publish date, is that this predates Tsubasa Chronicle, and here you are thinking up themes and plot elements from TRC 2 years before it came out. You think like CLAMP, and that's what makes your stories so authentic to read. :)

I believe I've read this story many years ago, when I was a kid! Did you ever post this story onto a website called Card Captor Syaoran or something of the like?

I Love Your Story it is very Awesome I Did Making same story in Magic school bus in wirte story i ture. and thank you!

lol thanks but I wrote that when I was a child and yes I am not Japanese

and this was written before Tsubasa Chronicles was made

domo arigatou

I really hope you're being sarcastic with this fic... Wapanese. Wapanese to the max. "OHAYO(U) OKAASAN! MOU! I AM NOT A KAIJUU!" My favorite was "I AM 19 YEARS OLD KAMI SAMA." Clearly, you not only know nothing about Japanese, but you don't even know how they speak from watching subtitled anime. Most Wapanese at least know that.

Whoa! This fanfic kinda reminds me of Tsubasa Reservior Chronicle...-

HELLO!_-

Wow, i don't know what to say... You are a real promising writer... i like your fics... sorry, i commented only at the last part of your fic... i have been reading hurt to heart, melody in my heart, and i'm just about to read your mission of the heart... er, compared to other fics i've read, yours is truly exquisite... Of all your fics, even if this doesn't have a sequel yet (at present), this was the greatest.. i heard this had an award... not being kinda rude, if you think it is being rude, may i know how old you are?...

you know, everytime i reminisce the ending of this story seven worlds, it gives me goosebumps, or some kind of tingling sensation.. you are so god at this!...

i am writing my own fic too, but i don't think it'll be any better than yours... i'm only a begginner at fics... from now on, you'll be my inspiration!

you've written such a fantastic fic! actually, i don't know how to describe your fic well... it is so good, so beautiful, spectacular, fantastic... ah! PERFECT!... (another tingling sensation came in)

i'm starting to like you more!

sigh..

i wish that one day, i'll be a good fic writer as you...

i think my fics are dumb..

so dumb enough that i don't have any courage to upload it anywhere!

do you have any multiply account? I wanted to know you better..

or just e-mail me anything about you..

but reaaly, if you have a multipy account, it'll be much more appreciated...

er, about the sequel, it's you, the writer, who'd decide about that..

well, on my opinion, based on your other sequels...

I'd LOVE to read it if it had one too!

the sneak peek excites me!

cute!

love the ending

Oh...Chette-chan! I just LoVe your STORIES!

What a WONDERFUL HaPPy EnD! *cry*

Wah *morecry* Your stories really are the best of the best! ( I really really mean it as i say...( or write) ).*sobs*. I love It, Chette-chan! -

Arigato for all these SUPERDUPER stories._

Oh my god! It was so cool. I just can't belive really really it was the best ending ever... and thanks for this great stories or fanfictions and please write more stories like this but mainly of cardcaptor sakura and daa daa daa or UFO Baby please.

BYE

Navpreet Kaur.

Heey i lovedthis story for a long time! i'm really happy i can finally come back to tell u, u did a really great job! and the reason i rembered was because i found u're story in my draw. (yes i printed it out since i loved to soo much. u know how much ink and paper that was?)and doesnt it seem like Tsubasa Chronicals is like this in a way...i think they cheated off your lol. Well keep up your fantasic writting.