Five/Tegan and Adric/Nyssa are my two favorite Doctor Who pairings. I love this.

Quality I love it even though I normally don't read this particular ship! How sneaky of them!

Keep up the good work

i like it.
you can't expect more than that because i am a reviewer of few words

You know, though, I'd really rather have naive than jaded. I've read some damn depressing stories where no one is happy, characters die, all is dark and drab. Don't we get enough unhappiness and unpleasant endings IRL? I don't want that sort of stuff in fanfic! I WANT the positive, uplifting, fluffy happy ending that makes me smile. This story provided one. Hey, bonus points: correct grammar and spelling, a quite respectable effort at good characterization, and the Fifth Doctor! He's one of my favorites.

Thanks for posting. If you have any other old stories lying around, I'd love for you to share them too.

Hey, that was a really cute fic. I liked the idea of Adric and Nyssa being together as couple and tricking the Docotr and Tegan into admiting their feelings for each other.

Beautiful work! ^_^

I think it's absolutely wonderful for a first fic, and whenever you wrote it, it pushes all my shippy fangirl buttons so I love it. And there is still 5/Tegan stuff out there. You want to keep an eye on warinbabylon's work on

LOL loved this! I've never read a Nyssa/Adric fic before and it works surprisingly well. Made me laugh how the younger ones manipulate the older ones. Great fun sweet stuff :- )

It was a lovely story and reading it brightens my bank holiday weekend. Thank you.
PS, I would just love to see the illustrations please. You could perhaps email me at;

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Amber

I really enjoyed reading this story, it made me smile, so thank you. :)

Aw. This is one of the sweetest stories I've ever read! A definite favourite. Glad you decided to share.

R.

Heeheeheehee. I don't care if it's naive, because I love it. Sweet.

Aaw, that was beautiful! A real *Squee* fic!

Wonderfully written, completely believable and totally in character. Congrats! It's amazing! Loved the Adric/Nyssa bit, too!

Thank you for this, it's been ages since I've read such an excellent Five/Tegan fic, which is a slight shame because it's a wonderful ship. Still. Great work! Loved it!

There's definitely not enough 5thTegan around. I'd love to see the illustrations- if that's ok? Anyway, great story. Hyphens forgiven due to the greatness of the whole thing!

Great work, especially with some Adric/Nyssa in there too :D

(I'd love the pictures of it, by the way, if you could email me: iristigerlily[at]livejournal[dot]com )