  lily 2008-03-23 . chapter 2 Wow this is good. you have to continue! it is so hard to find a story like this, so you gota'! |
  AmeliaMC 2008-03-07 . chapter 2OMG PLEASE UPDATE! It's been a long time since a fic has gotten me hot an bothered! |
 BlaiseAchilleas 2007-11-27 . chapter 2update this please
i love it!!
make some drama between jack and ralph!! |
| quaero lumen 2007-09-25 . chapter 2 heya. I absolutely love the story and the characters in it! The little love triangle thing between Jack, Roger and Ralph is brilliant! I can't wait to read more! |
 BakuraxRaven 2007-06-02 . chapter 2Awsome! Please update soon! |
| silverstar120287 2007-05-18 . chapter 2 hey, love your story! but when are you gonna put ch. 3 up? i've been waiting for months! your killin me, i wanna know what happends! :) |
| mai-chan 2007-03-14 . chapter 2 its a good fic. plz update! |
 Vanilla Slash 2007-02-10 . chapter 2poor ralph. things aren't working out for him at all. the first escap sounded like nothing more ten suicide, while the second was just an act of desparation (not that i blame him). |
| Kiseki no Tenshi 2006-12-13 . chapter 2 Interesting story!!
Can't wait to read more! |
| kiki 2006-11-17 . chapter 2 amazing! please please please please please please please update soon! |
| Thistledownwind 2006-11-11 . chapter 2 ^__^ Update please? |
| bakaneko 2006-10-05 . chapter 2 wow, i just love this one |
| Taita 2006-06-09 . chapter 1 is it just me or are there a lot of people writing lord of the flies fics for school assignments? do you all know each other or is it just me? |
| Taita 2006-06-09 . chapter 2 AW WHERES THE REST OF IT!!?!!?? MORE, MORE! |
 The Mad Empty Shell 2006-06-01 . chapter 2oww, poor ralphie! i loved da story, even if i didnt understand a thingy: does jack already love/like ralph, or does he fell in love afterwards? i didnt read quite well, since i was in a hurryy.. x_x |
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