I like this...seems to catch the spirit of the brothers...of the thought behind a lot of the violence of the movie... yeah they were bad boys, but they were bad boys with a purpose. I grew up in Detroit, but not like they did...and I'm grateful, but this caputured the essense of spirit...good job.

This was a really great story.
Captured the emotions perfectly, as well as Bobby's voice.
Great job, i loved it. ^_^

sweet two shot, nice. ^^ good job ^^

Wow. This is ReAlLy good, I wanted there to be more about them getting over Jack's death in the movie, so I like this. It's really well written. I'll put it on my favs!

That was sad. But great.

excellent story very well written

This was NOT a disappointment in the least! This was FANTASTIC! I'm just sad it's over... *sad face*

Very, very, very well done! I really hope that you have another FB fic up your sleeve. You're a wonderful writer. HURRAY! for finishing this fic, although I wish there was more... and HURRAY! for doing a great job with first person.

I hope I'm not too late in reviewing this! YAYAYAYA for such a great finale. Woot!

Yes... I'm strange... *sighs...*

Love,

~/Addy/~

And ps... WHY, JACKIE POO? WHY?

And I'm good now... I'm happy we've had this talk...

This is SUCH a great story. I was so ready to cry by the end. I want to cry right now just writing this review.

When I saw the movie, I was uncontrollably sobbing when Jack...Jack...he...you know...moved on...*shudders*

AND THEN AND THEN! I cried some more when Bobby broke down...when Jack...(I'm like Addy, I can't say it)

I think this is so wonderfully written. I really hope you continue with this. I am putting you on my favorites list. You rock.

Shining Star of Valinor

P.S. Jack looked so beautiful when he..."moved on"...am I right? Lol. I'm laughing through the tears...remember that.

i loved it and it brought tears to my eyes! please update!

*Cam*

Mann, i hate u for writing so good and crap! Lol I loved it, man it was like you were in Bobby's head. Good job and u better update~!

FINALLY IT LETS ME REVIEW! DAMN YOU, FANFICTION!

And now that that's out of my system... on to the review...

I adored this! I think the third time I watched Four Brothers I noticed Jack's rosary as he was... he was...

It took me three times because I closed my eyes when I first saw him... him...

You get the idea! I'm just not ready to say he... he... WHY.Y.Y.Y.Y.Y.Y.Y.Y.Y.Y.Y.Y.Y.Y.Y.Y.Y.Y.Y JACKIE-POO?

Yeah?

Back to the review (sorry for getting side tracked) You wrote this very beautifully, and I was about to cry by the end. Very well done. I really hope that you continue with this! I'm going to put this on my alert list to make sure I know if you do! Plus... this is also going on my favvy list. YOU ROCK!

So sorry this took me so long to review, but you must forgive me! (please.) The stupid site wouldn't let me (or anyone I think) review or log in. *scowls...*

Well... now that I've bored you half to death... you probably are cursing my name and hoping for me to shut up. You'll just have to suffer a few more momentos...

I LOVED THIS STORY!

There... that wasn't so bad...

and finally... I get to say...

love,

~/Addy/~

that was Good!

Really, really good. Very well written and Bobby is very in-character!

Beautifully written, great job! I never thought that the rosary the Bobby was wearing during the fight scene was Jack's, but now that I think about it, it could have.

Wow! I love it!! That is really good!! I hope there are more chapters to come! That awesome!