NO...
WHY did he have to DIE?
haha wonderful story :)
cept for oliver dying. that was sad :(
but i guess it made the story better...hmm...
well i happen to be a sucker for happy endings. :)
but this was a wonderful story :)
xoxos :)

Great, 'cept Oliver would be a 3-year-old toddler when Katie was born. It's cute as a 1-year-old but not that realistic, y'know? But what happened to Andrea? *confused* the end of the 1-year-old Oliver part was cute ^^ and the end of the entire thing was just scary and depressing.

NO! please tell me he's not dead...omg...I can't believe it!

You are a fantastic writer...I am going to spend the next few days reading all of your stories!

Be prepared to see a lot of my reviews in the next couple days... it's my habbit to find an author I like and read their stories when I have free time during the day usually untill I've read all of the the stories that I know the original fiction for. So when you see my reviews on like all of your stories don't call the police I'm not a stalker... I'm a very faithful reviewer, and after this I look forward to more of your stories.

loved the story -- kinda curious as to what happened to Katie's mom though - and why they were chased by deather eaters -- sry i usually read the long stories where all is explained... but loved this

no...
*sniffs*
dont let him die ='[
he should have at least heard her say she loved him ='[

p.s, i've just realised how fantastic you are at actually writing. i usually skimread stories, just taking in the plot, but i read this one properly [even though its 4am x] ] and some parts are really beautiful, i had tears in my eyes at one point.
.x.

No! Oliver can't die! I'm crying at the thought of it!

:'( *Sniff* So sad! And yet, so magnificent at the same time! Great job!

God, WHY DID OLLIE HAVE TO DIE?!?! /tear/ Loved it anyways.

oh I loved it! Hated the ending (Oli should NEVER die), but I loved the story! ! !

I'n going to cry... WA! oh that was good so sad though. your a great writer

oh my god! that was soo sad! it was good, but SAD! if i could i'd marry Oliver, but i can't and katie's a better match for him anyway...lol
luv,
laken

Oh, sad. Sniffle. Poor Oliver. Poor Katie. Sigh. But quite romantic, actually, in a very sad, depressing way. I liked it.

its an absolutely awesome story

You killed Oliver! But he's so hot! Sorry. I loved this, so dramatic. Funny, I have a fanfic up by the same title, except I got mine from a When In Rome song. Why did Katie leave? I'm gonna cry in a corner now.

aw it made me cry just a little...heroic moments *smile*