|Reviews for Contemplanys Hermi|
| screamballoon 5/1/06 . chapter 2
You've started a new story! Excellent.
I like your description of the bohemian hang-out in the first chapter; very evocative. And you've captured my interest about these two characters. One technical comment (surprisingly): the 2nd sentence in the 2nd chapter seems a little clunky. The rest of your writing flows as beautifully as always.