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| RBMIfan 2008-07-02 ch 1, | abuseThis is very good. I think you capture Sakumo's mindset well^^ |
| Kariko Emma 2008-01-07 ch 1, | abuseThis is just an amazing story every time I read it. I think this was very very well done. (Like pretty much every story you've written!) It's beautiful, simple, and to the point. (No pun intended.) Beginning to end, it's awesome. -Caliko |
| Tryptophan36 2008-01-07 ch 1, | abuse:-( So incredibly sad. Very well done. Beautiful in its own way. |
| cayce 2007-10-07 ch 1, anon. | abuseplease,don't write another one like this please...:{ |
| DracoAries 2007-09-10 ch 1, | abuseI love it! Poor Kashi-kun...! Heym is Jiraya like Sakumo's friend or brother? Personaly I think he's both, like brother and best friend. - D.A. |
| Momosportif 2007-07-24 ch 1, | abuseYou should like it very very much! Tis so gorgeous. "Go say hello to your wife"... that is so gorgeous. It makes me want to listen to "Wind"... don't try... don't cry... don't dry... cause you will hate yourself in the end... Sakumo needs a hug. Lovely job! |
| x gossamerstars 2007-06-17 ch 1, | abuseKyah...such sadness. |
| Joanie S. 2007-05-22 ch 1, | abuseThat was...wow. Wow and awesome. |
| copygeijutsuka 2007-04-06 ch 1, | abuseOh! So this is Kakashi's dad... i thought it was Yondaime at first... ;P silly me.. still, very sad.. but pretty. :3 |
| starartx 2007-03-05 ch 1, | abusewho is this we're talking bout again? |
| une see 2007-01-28 ch 1, | abuseKind of morbid, but I like. Poor Kakashi. :( |
| Seth7 2007-01-23 ch 1, | abusethat was happy yet sad at the same time. the title and summary amused me so much i had to read the fic. great job! ^_^ |
| PurpleAjah 2007-01-06 ch 1, | abuseSo original! And insightful n.n Also appreciate that you used the traditional Japanese form of seppuku instead of slitting his wrists or what-not =D |
| theREvamped 2006-09-18 ch 1, | abuseFor the topic, it's well-done. Having not killed myself, I'd find that I'd have a difficult time writing about the emotions and thoughts that would cross through someone's mind as they're about to commit "seppuku". |
| RainDragon 2006-09-12 ch 1, | abuse... *pulls out random machete* Okay. Ready. ^^ J.K, person, J.K. Wasn't that AMUSING. No, it really wasn't, especially since I'm crying. It was so GOOD... Kakashi... I want to hold him. His life was so hard. I want to tell him that it's okay, that he was good, that he was strong enough. That he doesn't have to reach so far over his head. That his father, White Fang Sakumo, and Obito and Rin all those who have taken the starlight journey before him don't need to come back down, because they have already meant everything to him and changed him and made him who he is. But that was so well written. Sakumo is one of those characters who does not find himself the subject of good fanfiction often enough-- I'm so glad you did this for him. It was excellent. Well, keep writing, stay inspired-- you are now OFFICIALLY a favorite author of mine. ^_^ Dewa! |