Wow. Mysterious quality to the story, and your writing style is so amazingly different from mine. Yours seems to flow more into the 2nd person narrative, but I guess that's obvious. Love the imagery. It's phenomenal.

*crying* Wow, great job. But now my eyeliner is running down my face!! >_

extraordinary. very moving and shocking all at the same time. never read a sakumo fic but this was very good.

This is... wow.

I agree with you about Sakumo. Wholeheartedly.

You've like, done his character way more justice than I've ever seen before.

GO YOU! :D

This is very good. I think you capture Sakumo's mindset well^^

This is just an amazing story every time I read it. I think this was very very well done. (Like pretty much every story you've written!) It's beautiful, simple, and to the point. (No pun intended.) Beginning to end, it's awesome.
-Caliko

:-(

So incredibly sad. Very well done. Beautiful in its own way.

please,don't write another one like this please...:{

I love it!
Poor Kashi-kun...!
Heym is Jiraya like Sakumo's friend or brother?
Personaly I think he's both, like brother and best friend.

- D.A.

You should like it very very much! Tis so gorgeous. "Go say hello to your wife"... that is so gorgeous. It makes me want to listen to "Wind"... don't try... don't cry... don't dry... cause you will hate yourself in the end... Sakumo needs a hug. Lovely job!

Kyah...such sadness.

That was...wow. Wow and awesome.

Oh! So this is Kakashi's dad... i thought it was Yondaime at first... ;P silly me..
still, very sad.. but pretty. :3

who is this we're talking bout again?

Kind of morbid, but I like. Poor Kakashi. :(