Nice follow-up for the Ratrap/Dinobot dynamic and an unexpected one for the Ratrap/Blackarachnia dynamic.

Makes perfect sense, but is too short for my taste, I give you a 8,5 out of ten.

PS: Where the heck is Sonic Adventure 2 role reversal?

aw, that was beautifull and sad, and what should be in the show. I always felt that the writers messed up that bit - they never let Maximals maroun their fallen comrade.

Aww, poor Rattrap. And I agree about the Blackarachnia trying to fill a hole that she doesn't belong in thing. I too felt that the writers were trying to compensate for the loss of Dinobot with a mixture of Blackarachnia and Depth Charge.

Anyways, back to your story, I like Rattrap's way of thinking and reasoning. I could definitely see him doing this, but I felt that the end was rather rushed. You could have done more with it or had more details. But all in all I really liked this piece. )