were you listening to "One-Winged Angel" when you wrote this?

Don't listen to stupid people who hate everyone! Your story is one of the best! I know because my sister is an author and you write as good as she does! please write more. I am definatly a fan of this story.

The name Chaos is fine. Story: present tense is fine.

Well... I hope you write more soon, Dark Chaos Demon!

Bye for now!
- Maou Koorikou-san

=) I really like this story... It is one of the best disgaea stories I have ever read. please write more soon!

I love this, please write more.

Hey, wow, I dont know about these guys, but i kinda like this, the first chapter so far anyways.
It seemed good to me, and its a unique concept, so far.
I don't see what the big deal is with you putting "Chaos" into your story, there should be no hate with that.
This fic over-shadows others out there, but I guess we all got different opinions, and mines could easily be as simuliar as theirs.
Still... No need to bring the Hate onto the table.
Personally, I think those last 3 people are 1 in the same. 0.o?
Like 3 personalities. G;G
Oh yes, and I do like the "present-time" writing style you do.

Congratulations for using one of the most cliched names ever imagined in fanfiction!
"claps"
BTW, one piece of advice: When you are telling a story, it sounds a lot better when you use past tense. Using present makes it sound stupid

wow, why did I guess "Chaos" was you from the beggining. Yeh, I haven't read the autor's name, but still, it was lame, man.
Wow, I can imagine now Chaos saving everybody, Chaos defeating Baal, Chaos being oh so kewl, bleh.
To describe this chapter, and probably the entire fic, 1 word:
LAME!

ok, that was one of the weirdest children you could have thought for these two. He doesn't sound or act or "look" like any of his parents. Of course, being a self insertion makes sense that it's gonna be an overpowered version of yourself.
I hope this story doesn't become OC centric. Heck, the main focus is Laharl and Flonne here, you said it yourself. If Baal hadn't defeated Laharl, then what would have happened?

interesting story idea. i pray to the Overlord Laharl that you update soon