Oh! Is there more? I do hope that this story has not been utterly abandoned. Poor, poor Aragorn!

I love your OCs and I like how you have Eowyn react to the chores that she must do. I think you've done a very nice job with bringing out the emotions in this intriguing AU.

I do hope that you come back to it and finish the tale.

Oh no he lost his arm! The story is really cool though. Please pretty please update soon!
-GD

Great story!
And I love that you used a quote from Julius caesar!! My favorite shakespeare play! Can't wait for the next scene!

Oh goodness! =D You must continue this, you must! I love it! It's beautiful! I must know what happens next!

love this story. cannot wait for more!!

Such a sad and interesting AU story... Aragorn no longer a fighting man? How awful! But -- I must say that it is truly a unique story as I haven't read any with similar plotlines -- please, update ASAP!

Aw...Arwen's a little bitchy, isn't she? Poor Aragorn. Lovely chapter, though--I'm loving where this is going. Do update soon. ^_^

Oh, dear. Aragorn has a death wish.

I'm glad Arwen's here to make him feel better (Even if she doesn't stick around for long). Of course, after what just happened, I don't think that ANYONE is feeling better.

Keep up the great work!

-Rabid Angel :)

Thes is a beutiful concept and a beautiful story, and for that I bow my head to you. I apologise if I have misinterpreted your point, but, what has just happened is, I am sorry to say, more than a little impossible.

The love of Arwen and Aragorn is a truly beatiful, tragic thing that could in no way fail. Arwen stayed in Middle-earth for Aragorn, meaning that she gave up both paradise, and any chance at all of seeing her parents and brothers again. For love Arwen gave up her mother who she had not seen in ages. She gave up her immortality just for Aragorn. Crippled, Aragorn may be, but this would in no way affect their feelings for each other. This, at least, Tolkein makes very clear

~Yours truly,
B.M.O

O, I'm liking this. Please do continue--everyone is in character so far, and it's a concept I've never yet seen. Very nice. ^_^

Hm... I think Eowyn's in lurve...

Anywhoo, great chapter. It was quite well-written, and you did a good job describing Eowyn's shock over the lady with boils and Aragorn. Keep it up!

Cheers!
-Rabid Angel :)

I am really enjoying this story! Out of the hundreds of Aragorn Angst stories I have read, I've never laid my eyes on one when Aragorn was missing a limb... lol interesting. At the beginning I thought he broke his back or something, but the missing arm was a wicked little twist. Longer chapters would be nice though *grins*

awsum! keep going hurry up and write more

Interesting start. Hope there's more soon.

keep going, i like it