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Reviews for: Louie Messer, Deceased
Annabella
2009-08-07 . chapter 1
WOW. Short, but amazing. I could really hear Danny's voice in your story. It's like he was saying it himself. Finding the right voice for a character and making it sound legit are the hardest things to do in writing. You nailed it. Great job! I had always wondered what happened to louie, but they never said. It was kind of annoying because Danny's my fav.
NSW
2007-01-19 . chapter 1
very nice
the-Bookworm-Princess
2006-06-04 . chapter 1
Okay, don't know any of these peeps, but the story was touching. Hints of man-friendship! yaya! hehe, when you said "The gravedigger drops his butt onto some poor soul’s last resting place." I was like, "he sat on it?" ;);)
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