I think the idea is good but the execution is poor. You don't seem to understand the technical aspect of writing a story.

Cute ending. I really enjoyed it. Thanks for writing the rest. I hope to read more from you soon.

I can see Sean thinking about that with Emma, he's so sweet to her. Good job with the thoughts.

Cute. It was only five, I'm sure he'll be okay, thought maybe not. Manny will be wondering where she is.

This is an amzing and always will be story. Thanx for puting me in chapter 8. You told me you would update and you did. Thanx for that. Keep writing and I'm glad I'm your inspiration it makes me very happy. Giving a Dfan some inspiation to keep posting, writing, and updating.

I like hearing Sean's thoughts. Cute. I hope you write more.

This was good. Emma seems upset at Manny. Interesting reaction to her name on his chest.

Please update the story keep going and what did she leave maybe it was an excuse to come back and are they still together or is it an open relationship like I think it is amazing writing by and amazing writer giving a Semma fan some inspiration.

Amazinng story I love the Semma story what is going to happen next does Manny know she is dating Sean again because I got that impression but keep going it is an amazing story keep going giving you some inspiration

can you please post the rest of the chapters i want to know what happens this is a hot story like burnin keep it comin great job

Good chapter. Tracker's back! I love Tracker, he is so awesome. Short visit, but hey, I guess that's how it works. I wonder what he's going to ask her.

Good chapter. I wonder who is at the door.

Can you please email me

cute that emma went to sean in wasaga. Keep posting

Cute. I love how they get together. It's cool. Him comforting her about Jay was cute, and just paying attention to her. I wonder what'll happen with everything. Keep going.

Aww, Emma went after Sean. That's so adorable. I love their moment when he helps her into the house. I so hope they get back together. Good job, I like your story.