great story i loved it i hope you will write other ones they will be great

That was a great story. You should write more.If you need ideas here's one: I think sasuke and sakura should go out. Naruto should go out with hinata. Hinata and naruto should be happy that sasuke is dating sakura.

this was GOOD! some how i like stories where sasuke kisses up to sakura (NOT literally kissing up), it makes him look like a sissy in way (he he he, HE DESERVES IT HE'S SUCH A JERK!)

You did a good job. I'm a sucker for a happy ending, so thanks for that too!

ya know, there is such a thing as making Sasuke outta character and still good right? well nice job.

That was cute, I really liked it. You should keep writing, you're good!

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I really liked it. The story flowed smoothly and was overall great.

Great story. It's nice to see Sasuke in chatacter... for once. It does have some errors, though. You switched POVs in the middle of Sasuke's little opening thing, You also switched tense a bit too. Plus, on some occasions, there are words missing. Easy mistakes to make... I know, but stil, they stick out from this great story. I know, whenyou're struck by an idea, you just want to get it out. But remember to check your stories carefully before submitting them.

It ws really nice. I liked it

YAY...FLUFF!that was good and its okay if sasuke's out of character as long its for the good of him and sakura...i love that pairing!

Aww it was so cute I know its hard keeping Sasuke in character but you did a good job till the end. I salute you! ^-^