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angel in pink 2008-11-09 . chapter 7
‘I don’t think that makes me an expert on coming back from the dead.’ Daniel grumbled folding his arms across his chest. ‘I don’t intend to make a habit of it.’
hm...key word there, intend. He's died like 4 times before the series ends. Anyway, these are really well written. GOOD JOB! :)
Whirlwind421 2008-08-18 . chapter 9
Aw. Poor Daniel. I love Daniel. Good characterization and I think you wrap up the show very well!
Whirlwind421 2008-08-18 . chapter 6
Great story! Love it!!
Whirlwind421 2008-08-13 . chapter 5
I loved the ending! *grins*
Whirlwind421 2008-08-13 . chapter 4
Evil MacNally!! Great story!! I like it!! I like all this after fics. I like seeing the bonding of the group!
Whirlwind421 2008-08-13 . chapter 3
Great story!! I liked the ending!! It was very cute how all the guys started listing how it was their fault.
Whirlwind421 2008-08-13 . chapter 2
Awesome story!! Really wraps the show up with all the missing pieces answered and thought said.
Whirlwind421 2008-08-13 . chapter 1
Great story! It's nice to see Daniel and Sam bonding!
kellethMetheus 2008-08-01 . chapter 28
Wow is all I can say. How long did it take you to do this? These are fabulous. I am reading my way through and so I won't comment on them all but they are great. When I watch this show it just screams out for tags. It's like at the end of each episode they hand it off to fanfiction writers and say fill in the blanks with what you want to have happen and you have done that for us.

Keet it up and I hope to see season five soon. Once I am done this one I will start on the next group. Thank you and again. I love how you have caught the spirit of the character, too many stories I have read could be any couple in fanfiction but you have captured them all and I find myself laughing my head off at what come out of O'Neill's mouth.

Keep going please!

Kelli
Celwen 2008-03-12 . chapter 17
For today I'm stopping here...17 chapters all at once in one sitting is a bit overwhelming...However, I wish to say that I like very much your ideas of these tags. It's like an addiction to the show, and I love this...exploration of their dynamics as team and friends and couples...

Also, I'm a huge Sam/Jack shipper, but I love the team-thing too. So, I fell in love for the last parti of this 17th chapter. Good good job!

Thanks for sharing, I hope my English is good enough to let you understand my ideas and my feelings.(I'm Italian, you know...)
moregoth 2008-02-22 . chapter 40
Wow, amazing writing, I really enjoyed how this created a new dept too the differnt episodes a view at the fallout to all that happens to them. Off to start reading the next part!
????? 2008-01-08 . chapter 40
this was an interesting way to write stories.
Venea Taur 2007-08-07 . chapter 40
I loved this series- couldn't stop reading it. The characters were so real. The interaction between the characters was great. I like how you show their growth as a team and weave a sense on continuity through the episodes.
SilverAngel99 2007-07-18 . chapter 40
It took me days to get through them all, but I finally finished volume one. And what a damn fantastic job you have done on them. These pieces are undeniably brilliant, I could honestly see them being put into the show. You did a great job at bringing in elements from present and future events - even filled in a few loop holes in storylines. The events that you included were both powerful and possible without being so AU that you couldn't move onto the next episode.

You injected some really great emotion into it all and really explored the friendships that are in the show and even worked to make them seem more believable. Even the friendships that aren't seen so much on the show, such as between Jacob and George, even Janet and Sam. The humor, the angst, the friendship... an absolutely beautiful and most of believable series.

Your writing style if virtually flawless and your characters are so in character. I especially loved the on going storyline with Jolinar and Sam's "imprisonment" on the base during that whole section. You didn't allow the characters to simply get over things, or simply have things happen to them, but have things build up. Not only did you do it like that, but you did it in a such a beautiful, flawless fashion that this whole volume was just such a pleasure to read. I'm looking forward to going onto the next volume.

Thank you so damn much writing such a large fic and making it such a pleasure to read :-)
NZNeep 2007-07-17 . chapter 40
Heh, so I skipped a head of my "rationing" and finished volume 1. I'm loving these so much! Like I said for Rifts and Chasms, I love how you can fit so much into the boundaries of canon and without going out of character. Brilliant :D
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