Oh, that was truely incredible! I love it, and their aren't enough stories about Rose. But this was AWESOME! and I loved it!

That was the best fanfic I've read so far in days! Good story, and I laughed so much because of the comedic effects, great story indeed.
make more in the future okay, I lkike BartxRose pairings.

Beautiful one shot. Lovely. I luv Rose, but I've never thought up the pairing for her. (Never touched one of the comics though. ~sigh~) My fave scene was the last scene w/ Rose and Slade. Hmm, Oklahoma? I did that play once. It was fun. Later!

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Ha! Bart makes me laugh. However I miss Impulse and his thought bubbles.

Rodger and Hammerstein are some interesting guys- and I would recommend them as well. As a theater dork/writing freak/band geek (among other such titles sure to elevate social status), the thought of the Titans bursting into song was enough to make me laugh. This line, though, was my favorite:

"Thank you God Almighty and X’hal and Azar and whoever else is operating the planet right now!"

This story is sweet, serious, irreverent, touching, and a Cinderella story all in one- and if the kids are just a touch OOC, it fits the story. Besides, they need to laugh sometimes, and this fits that bill perfectly.

ek! I love your story so much! :)

Wow great story i love the cross over!

I see the notion of the Bart/Rose relationship in the T.Titans possible future story inticed you.You did a nice job with Slade as the stoic,yet still fatherly...to a point...mercenary.
I can see him meeting Rose's first boyfriend,strategically cleaning his guns at the time...
Rose was a woefully underwritten character when she first arrived,way back when,hopefully the comics will do her justice now.
Bart was a riot...

First, the good: Your grasp of the group dynamic amongst the teenage members of the Titans was fantastic. The scene where they all end up wrestling with each other was particularly well done.

Second, the confused: Why is Mia around and Raven isn't? Speedy was introduced after Raven, so it doesn't make sense for Mia to be at the Tower when Rachel isn't. And why is Dick there in the first place? If memory serves, he didn't want to have anything to do with this particular iteration of the Titans.

Third, the not-so-good: Watch out for cliches in Rose's character. Although she is a bit of cliched character to begin with, introducing too many elements of her torn mental state makes her a bit tiresome. In particular, the part where she tells Bart that she's tried of the life she's leading, and the part where Bart says that he just wants to make her happy and she tells him that he already has, seemed a little bit of the angst-romance cliche. Just a bit. Watch out for those in the future.

Overall, I enjoyed this story quite a bit. Your portrayals of each of the characters seemed spot on - in particular, your somewhat sympathetic look at Deathstroke made me nod and smile. Congrats and good job.

That was absolotly wonderfull! Tell me if you write any more!

That. Was. Sweet.

Monosyllabic, I know, compared to my more sesquipedalian reviews; but I loved that piece of light-hearted fluff.

Rose Wilson has always been a terribly pathos-ridden character to me, a Tara Markov of her generation. I've seen her as another Lian Harper, and I've always hoped she could grow up into a strong-willed heroine, rather than a plaything hankering after her father's ephemeral love. (Shades of Talia al'Ghul, anyone?)

But you seem to enjoy writing Ravager I, and I enjoy the spin you've taken on her. It's not the way I'd go about it, but it's a great direction nonetheless.

She's been paired with many in her time, both heroes and villains, counting Nightwing among her lovers. Nightwing, scion of the Batman; Nightwing, who lost countless team-mates to her father...

Therefore it's quite interesting to see her shipped with Bart Allen. This is a cute, adorable teenage story, though as Azelma has put it, wub =/= love.

Keep it up! -- I don't usually take to fluff, but this was pretty good.

Perhaps overly sweet, rather too melodramatic and unrealistic; but who CARES about plot holes, gaping or not, when the story has such appeal?

Your writing really perks me up and makes my day. Hell, when even my exam papers blatantly trumpet their grammatical mistakes, a fantastic story is just what the doctor ordered.

Thanks & regards,

A Reviewer.

Wonderful! Absolutly fantastic!

Wow...this was awesome. I've always been a fan of seeing fics that take superheroes and put them in more normalizing situations where we get to see them acting like their age. Loved this story...although I wish Raven was a part of it :-D. Anyway, the imagery was just...perfect. The dialogue was so well done. Loved all the details on the dance and the moment where Rose and Bart finally have a moment with eachother. An excellent read, keep up the good work!

it was cute!

Well, it's a nice break from all the Kid Flash/Jinx. I'm not the greatest at drawing. Ask someone like Jedi-And or Prisionero to draw it. They're pretty good.