 IvoryAlchemist 2006-04-30 . chapter 1Wow. Amazing work you got there. I liked the imagery, the symbolism, the honesty. It was really great. Even though I never considered Wilson betraying House like that, your story made it plausable. I especially like how Stacy seems not to care about House anymore, even though she really does, she just tired of the struggle. That's exactly what it feels like. You just want to give up, let all go away, and it was perfect to symbolize that with the piano, House's instrument of choice. Bravo! |