I think this story is perfect the way it is, but I think you should do a story on the first two years of Rory and Finn in this situation. The first year, how they got together, living with Steph, etc...

Really cute story!

loved the flashback!
and rory and her dad's convo!

keep writing!
~Liz

cute story! just a little tip build me buttercup was done by the foundations. you got knack for writing keep up the great work!

The whole shoe thing was CLASSIC Rory Lorelai stuff...

Awe that was so cute! i loved how they meet because i can so imagine that happening. Love you've just left a smile on my dile :) CHEERIO :)

O COOL! How'd they get together? LOL Look at me giving you something to think about... LMAO... anyway TOTALLY COOL!

"“Hello, I love you won’t you tell me your name?” He sang slightly off key."“So if you’re not afraid it’ll bite, why don’t we go inside, I’ll hold your hand and everything.”“He was close, but not the real thing, would you like me to go get him?” amazing story. so cute. and i enjoyed a focus on chris rather than lorelai.

aw great one shot I like the way you set this up good job!:)

so,
i just read this story, and lo and behold!
it is from an author i was praising like what?
a minute or two ago?
how scary is that?!
lol
but it is all the same here, i love it how they met, and i really love how she chucked the shoe at them, and how another one was found in an oven
-_-
dude
if it was in anyother story apart from one based on the gilmore girls, i would be really worried
but then again it is them, so its just normal
how cool is that? :D
lol
so i dont know how you would continue this one on so it isnt a one-shot, but if you manage it, i will be pleased!
so yea. . . . .
ill just go now. . . . .
toodles!
and keep writing!

loved it update soon

Absolutely wonderful start to a great story! I'd love to read more if you continue. Maybe go along through school or maybe tell a story of them going off on an adventure. I really enjoyed your writing here. Good job!

its great but it would of been a great multi-chapter tho

aw, really cute.

aww it was reall ygood