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magic-carpet
2007-07-21
ch 9,
abuse*clicks* Chloe! This is seriously one of the most engrossing, amazingly writtem, beautiful, yet sad pieces of writing ever. I love how Nick has been there for her through all of this, and has realized how much he loves her through it all. It's amazing how you capture their relationship. Even though it's extremely sad, I think it's wonderful. Can't wait for more!
My Butterfly Reflection
2007-04-27
ch 9,
abusePlease, update soon.
Your Spell-Binding Lover
2007-04-24
ch 9, anon.
abuseWELCOME BACK! (Again.) *FANFARE AND MARCHING BAND*

*glomp*

I love Nick and Sara's different reactions to the news of the masectomy. I love how Sara says it so cut and dry. It's good comic relief (OMG! proof that I've been listening in Falhman's classes!). It's good to hear that you know where you're going (I think I know how it's going to end) and I am with you to the end.

You make Nick such a sweetie. Not that he isn't already of course. >.>

*GLOMP*

KEEP WRITING!
jdcocoagirl
2007-04-20
ch 9,
abusethis getting more and more deeper drama and sara is very logical about the procedure.
update soon.
QTR
2007-04-16
ch 9,
abuseSeriously, I thought the 'Let's cut off my boobs' line was hysterical but at the same time it just comes to show how desperate Sara's become. Oh woe as me :(
Gear's Girl
2007-04-16
ch 9,
abusepoor Sara...
Meg-Breanne
2007-04-16
ch 9,
abuseOh my God . . . this story is so sad. But I can't wait to read more.
katydid13
2007-04-16
ch 9,
abuseInteresting story!

It's extremely unlikely that someone Sara's age would have tumors this advanced unless she has a family history of very aggressive breast cancer. Additionally, even why they think they can just remove the tumor (a lumpectomy) the patient is asked to sign a consent form for a mastectomy if certain conditions apply to avoid this situation. (We've done this more times that I care to count in my family.)

Self-exams save lives so if you find a suspicious lump don't hesitate to get it checked out. However, if you are under 40 its very, very unlikely to be cancerous or advanced if it is cancerous.
bauerfreak
2007-04-16
ch 9,
abuseSo glad you posted! Nick's bedside manner is so sweet. So sad about the masectomy, but I'm glad Sara seems to have a positive attitude about it. The comment about "cut off my boobs" made me laugh. Great chapter; glad you're continuing!

Hanna
thjersyjnkx33
2007-04-16
ch 9,
abuseman, that sucks.
but a great chapter.

i hope i never have to get my boobs chopped off...
Little Tussi
2007-04-16
ch 9,
abuseaww.. both, so sad. I hope things will work out anyway.
Keep on the good work
QTR
2007-04-16
ch 8,
abuseOh dear, I'm scared now too :( I hope Sara's okay, she's already been through so much already (but that coming from me is a bit ironic, huh?).
QTR
2007-04-16
ch 7,
abuse*taps foot* Well it's about darned time, you two! For a minute there I was seriously afraid they were getting married to the alien minister LOL
QTR
2007-04-16
ch 6,
abuseGo marry her NOW Nicky because you might not have forever :(
QTR
2007-04-16
ch 5,
abuseAww, that's so sweet, Nick, the romantic. I forgot to mention in the last chapter how much I loved the bit with Nick shaving off his own hair. So sweet... it made me want to cry and grab them both and hug them xD
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