Sorry I did not read the draft GF. A very merry Christmas sand happy new year to you send in the next draft ASAP.. This chapter, chapter 12 was awesome but again I hoping for more longer chapters.

Write back to privately by via email soon. Good work as always two thumbs up from me ^^

Do you know that your writing is incredible? I love how you gradually build on anzu and amelda's relationship. I like how you incorporate dueling into your storyline and not make anzu win by an excessive margin which is more realistic. Your writing flows really well and has rarely any grammatical mistakes. I really hope you will continue this because it's a great story and i'd love to read the next chapter. Please update soon. ^^

eep! :] aw so romantic! Amelda is starting to open up, yay! another great chapter from you, I stayed up just to read this!

So happy you updated this!!Hehe i began worrying at some point..xD

WHOO! I'm so happy to see an update for this story! I thought it was kinda cute how Amelda was confused about what to do on a date. Poor Anzu! She thought that he wasn't happy. I thought the very last part was sweet though. I can't wait to see where it leads to. Please update soon.

Let them kiss already!
Argh!
Hehe, joking ^^
Good job there.

zomg update! ek and the romance starts rolling! I'm so excited to read more!! and now you have me hungry for ramen and bento food :D

I must admit that I was looking for something more... passionate and not this awkward but I guess they are both really young, it's would be quite unaccurate to write something too mature.
Ah ah ah "Amelda, I like you" :p
Congrats ^^b

I'M SO SORRY!!

it took me so long to read/review this!

Whoah, it was unexpected to see Anzu making the firts move and so openly!I'm really looking foward to see how this is going to work out!Pease update soon =3

Oh I'll hang in there but I want to see more updates when possible and posted ^^

~smcandy~

Oh good ending I liked that late quote from anzu.

Please have another update ASAP gf ^^

~smcandy~

Yes I an enjoying it please continue cannot wait to read what other chapters i have missed reading when you updated.

~smcandy~

It was the best you could do.

Good work though I liked it ^^

wow this was pretty good chap. alister facing his fear alwsome. i wondeer if anzu's friends will ascept him.

oh yes again, another great chapter!


Best Christmas present ever!Heheheheheh!
And FINALLY Amelda seems to quit on his tough attitude. Cab't wait for the bext chap!