great chap. i like how you made alister think he needs no one. the character devilopment is top noch keep wrighting

wow i love the story but htis is the most strangest duel i ever seen. i guess you where going by the rules of the show. i liked how you made amelda a bad ** in this story. it seems the cards anzu used where up to date. keep wrighting i love this story.

i really like where this is going keep it up

How am I enjoying the story so far?
I CAN NOT wait to read the following chapters. Once again, this shipping featuring Anzu (your pretty middle class schoolgirl) and Amelda (poor yet gorgeous biker) is one of the most interesting ever.
I can't wait to see them alone and getting to know each other rather than always beeing chased by gangsters. Can't wait for romantic moments to kick in.
I know that Amelda don't want to play Duel Monsters, but this could a good way to get out of this "rats infested hell hole"?
Anyway, good job!

YAYNESS such a quick update!I was very very very happy to see it!:)

and this chapter was super awesome,I enjoyed every single part of it.Damn those two are simply priceless when they are alone.

genius i totaly love this fic you got alisters personality down pact i applaud you i will continue to read this fic and review when i have the time.

YES! AN UPDATE!The whole duel thing was pretty good cause all of the Yugioh duels are really detailed. It sucks how that criminal guy get insulting Amelda, but it was cool how Anzu came to his defense. I've got a feeling that he's gonna return the favor in the next chapter. Please don't make us wait so long for another update!

An update(^_^)V
I think you wrote this dueling part fairly well, but this is too bad since it's so short. Can't wait to read more!
I am really looking forward the romance to kick in the story.
When everything will be done with this gang, I hope Anzu and Amelda will spend some time together *0*

Good chapter and I do hope Amelda gets her back and does not scare her as bad as he did earlier. Maybe he will have learned his lesson. Hopefully Anzu will win the duel. Please update soon.

yay an update! a duel? o0 Anzu must be kidding herself if she thinks her cards can win... =D does she even have a full deck? chapter 7 will definitely be worth the wait, as the rest of them have been =^^=

Oh wow this chapter took an unexpected turn! First we have Amelda going crazy one moment, but then trying to save Anzu the next. Now it looks like Anzu is the one who's going to have to save him. I love this story! Excellent job, please keep it up!

will you marry me?!


I love for updating this!


\Please keep going I can't get enough of it!

Very good glad to see you updated once again (^^)


Continuing updatign I smell a duel about to happen with Anzu and your Oc I look forward to it in chapter seven ASAP.

~smcandy~

nabbi: really really good story.
Jen: wah!
nabbi: what on earth are you doing?!
Jen:(sobbing)HOW... COULD... AMELDA BE... SO...MEAN!
nabbi: (sighs) don't mind this ** (pats Jen)
Jen: WHO THE HELL ARE YOU CALLIN A **?!
nabbi: -.- its amazing how quickly she can recover when i insult her.
Jen: ^.^ please update soon!
nabbi: yeah and save me from the torture of listening to this moron whining about when the update is coming.

You're MEAN ?!How could you leave such a cliffhanger!?!?!GRAH!


:P:P:P



anyway your work is amazing in this chapter too.Please,please update soon!I've been waiting for updates for so long I simply love your story!



Gi~