This is a good story. Please continue. Jaden and Alexis forever.

update soon please i am crazy about this story!!

AWESOME!!

lol i feel sorry for David lol

love it!

i am hooked to this story now GO JxA (grins stupidly)

plz update soon i want to see what alexis talks to jaden about

I was gonna review earlier but I never got around to it. First of all, though I hate Judai a lot, I was actually rooting for him when he was dueling your OC's, the "Gang Leaders" are basically God Moding, which I hate. Also, I was half-expecting Judai to get his Evil Heroes deck after being depressed, then going on an owning spree or something. Anyway, this has sort of motivated me to continue my GX fic. I can see some grammatical errors, and I really hate those English "Get your game on!" and "Chazz it up!", they irk me, but I have to tolerate it. Also, some of your OC's have some... Unoriginal names. Although some twists were pretty good, I hate how the mighty Sartorious goes down, and how you gave Judai the crap Neos/E-Hero hybrid deck. You should maybe make an Dark Judai with his Evil-Heroes take their souls on your next fic. Okay, now this is off topic, I better wrap this up before I get modded, seeya!

jaden doesn't win his duels on luck alone he has skill that lets him play his cards well. there are some people that don't have to work hard to be good at something and jaden is one of them.

Ok dude no offense but that duel wasn't that good,at least Jaden could've put up a better fight and you made Ed lose so quickly,you should've made that duel or you losing your touch man,I'm sorry but that's what i think.

BEWK

Yo, I cant help but agree with some of your sentiments in the AN, good chapter by the way. I am happy to see Alexis back on the good guys side. And I hope Jaden does win. I liked how you had the dragon dual, they are my favort cards, and even though the deck lost I feel that you did them justice. As for your comments at the end. Though older than him, I do look up to Jaden in two regaurds.

One is how protective he is of his friends. I dont know many people that would be willing to do what he did for them. Can you honestly say that you would gamble your soul for the chance, CHANCE not even a garente that you could save them and yourself? As ashamed thatI am of saying it, I dont know if I could, so I respect him in that regaurd.

The other reason I respect his character is his belief in having fun. In my opinion, if someone only plays to win, they have no business playing. Games are ment to be fun, and people that only play to win take away from that. I'm all for competitive play, but there is a line that shouldnt be crossed. Though I never realy got into dual monsters, I do play several card games, and I have two decks at least for each, one that I play with for fun, the other is to destory people that have that "got to win at any cost" attitude. I hate playing with those decks, but fortunatly I dont have to use them often.

As for Power Duelists, Chazz already took care of that in the show. Beating his multimillionare brothers with a deck whose strongest monster had 500 attack points.

I like this story

nice sory hope u an update soe time soon ^^

Pleasee update I really like it! And if you have read my name: you can imagine what I want in this story =) (uhh.. I don't mean the rating M stuff. I just mean J×A end up together. But you also have something about that in your summary so.. just update =D)

yay an update!
Alexis is back but the gravekeepers may not be able to be stoped, update soon!