Awesome story! I really like it a lot since ratchet is one of my favorite characters! Keep up the great work!!

really loved the "Playing with Kids" part A LOT. i hope you continue with this... :)

This is pretty awesome. I especially love the Jealous Ratchet chapter.


So good job and hope that you update soon.

aw!! that was adorable! se? ratchet really is a caring mech behind all the death threats!

i love these little one shots; they're very well written! please continue!

lol that was cute
bestest doctor

*Grins* Aw, how cute! ^_^ This is great I can't wait to see what you write next! ^_^

Aw, that last one was so adorable :-)

Aw, that's sweet.

OMG...I have to say this is my fav chapter. Overall, very interesting particularly the fight with the lamp post.

*snicker* Now THAT was funny!

This is a very heartwarming story. The use of not-so-good grammar ("bestest")and the way Wendy's dialogue was written is just enough to make the reader realize how young she is. Great job. I hope you don't give up on this.

Aww, cute! I like Jazz' explanations about sightings and whatnot...I always wondered about that. ~_^ Ratchet's just a big gooey softy under that tough exterior, and much to his chagrin, everyone knows it. ^_^

Very sweet. I can actually hear Ratchet's voice actor say that last line...

*laughs* "The chief engineer facepalmed." Good image.

"old married couple" Ahahahaha!

Cuteness!! ^_^