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rydensupporter 2007-07-11 . chapter 1
Wow. That was awesome. Very descriptive.

~Proud member of WUAC~
Cassie 2007-02-04 . chapter 1
It was good...ever thought of continuing it?
lil' munkies 2006-09-30 . chapter 1
DAMN! I love your stories! YOUR WAY WITH WORDS RISES TO MORE SUPERIOR LEVELS KNOWN TO FAN-KIND!
Bob Zox 2006-07-29 . chapter 1
This was NOT "so-so"!
(breathing fast, heart pounding)

Danny is right! "this is torture in the worst form possible!"
Especially for a guy!

Sam licking her lips...

you are SO CRUEL!
^_^
MORE PLEASE!
.My.Thesis. 2006-06-18 . chapter 1
OMG, THAT WAS SO CUTE! XD I like it that Danny is love sick...:P Turns the tables around. (Nods) But, he was alittle out of character...barely, though. (Shrugs) YOUR STORY IS AWSOME!
pearl84 2006-06-10 . chapter 1
Aww that was so cute! I love the description! And it came out Fantastic. You are an awesome writer!
KittyKiChi 2006-06-03 . chapter 1
ONWARD MY STEED! THAT...is TOO funny. Lovely and cute. Peace.
PnayBabyGurl 2006-06-01 . chapter 1
I never thought that I'd enjoy reading a story about drinking a milkshake. XD Written very well and I loved the DxS mushy-ness. ^^ Keep writing!
Star-In-The-Sky-25 2006-05-10 . chapter 1
OMG!! That's SO FUNNY!! I luved the part with the "Then onward steed!! To the Nasty Burger!" THAT WAS HILARIOUS!! I think you could go further with this story!1 You should add anuther chappie! Whatev is cool wif you!! I know I loved it!! XD
Dark12light 2006-05-04 . chapter 1
A very cute, fluffy one-shot! I love it! *claps hands*
dplover101 2006-05-03 . chapter 1
that is so cute you should write a seqal
Kira25 2006-05-01 . chapter 1
This is pretty good. Not the best but it is pretty good especially for a short one shot. One shots area awesome aren't they. I also like how you had mutual feeling on both sides because I tend to sometimes get into these kick of torturing myself with angsty fiction and sometimes a bit fluff here and there can make my day. I loved how you keeped the characters relatively in character and I'm a huge fam of D/S there is no one else for Danny out there, not even Valerie... she belongs to Tucker because the poor guy is so underated and deserves someone nice. Your grammar and formatting was excellent and the characters weren't OOC or anythings so it really was a relatively good story and I hope you keep on writing.
CeresRose 2006-05-01 . chapter 1
that had to be the best story on sam and danny i heard that is a one shot. u should put another chapter on it about sam thinking on what happens after she gets out of shock and thinks about what danny did to her
Leppers 2006-04-30 . chapter 1
I don't think it was so-so. I thought it was great. Very, very cute. ^^
strange organized chaos 2006-04-30 . chapter 1
Obviously the best, amazingly written one shot in the world. Your amazing, so amazing that you deserve a cookie so ...(hands you a virtual cookie) there you go! Cuddos!
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