 ViraHeartless 2008-08-22 . chapter 14Sakura and Haku it would be hilarious but we need more Gaara scenes there b 2 many Neji scenes I half expect it to be Naruto who gets her in the end |
 ViraHeartless 2008-08-22 . chapter 8nice story its hilarious |
 al2010 2008-04-07 . chapter 14Great chapter. I think Sakura should end up with Neji. Please update soon. |
 BlackandWhite Masks 2008-04-01 . chapter 14 ...wow, you guys rock!...LOL...You guys are hilaripus and i just love what you gus write. ** the OCC or OOC or whatever it is. If its funny and people love to read it anyway, Just continue on. As far as I'm concerned, its great. This is my favorite story as of far, just so you know. The grammar is actually okay, its not that bad and we get it anyway. I like your style of writting, nice vocab...err, keep on writting OCC anyway. Please update, I'm begging you,...Uhh, can you please put Sasuke-kun in the story? It would be great to see him OCC, just imagine it, LOL. Hehe, put them in a hot spring, joke. Ja! |
 Chi-san is AWESOMENESS 2007-09-29 . chapter 6...i'm speechless... O.o
That was genius...XD |
 the tomato 2007-08-02 . chapter 7o_0...u scare me but okay |
 the tomato 2007-08-02 . chapter 1i like this fic its realistic even for a highschool fic keep on trucking |
 Enko 2007-06-16 . chapter 14I love this. I've read the whole fic three times! X3
okay, on to the important stuff:
While reading I make a map thingy of the most possible "from-now-to-end" plot line that the story will probably take. (sorry that didn't make much sense)
so, i think that Sakura should start liking Neji more, but then get together with Gaara, and then Neji get all mad, and then you go on from there.
That's just what i thought, in a very very very vague explination. ^^;
so yeah. ^^
I love this fic so much! X3
-Enko
um, when are you writing more of it?? |
 hotneji24 2007-05-29 . chapter 14 NEJI IS DEAD SEXY! an datz y dey should b 2geda...ok hakusaku way freaky who wood like a boyfren dat likes 2 play NAKED TWISTER although dat game souns interestin...lol...niwayz which wood u pic a weird psycho (cant spell so if dats spelt wrong dont give A) man-woman whoz jus dere, a hot guy who luvs green skittles, or a hot guy whom u enjoy startin bouts wid an iz very interestin when it ** 2 wierd arguments
i'd tek c)
i mean dont get me rong Gaara iz smexilicious itz jus dat Neji is SMEXILICIOUSER...so NEJI WINS, NEJI WINS...WO!
STILL WANT DA BED NEJI??...hehehe
SMEXY STORY KEEP IT UP GRL!! |
 hotneji24 2007-05-29 . chapter 11 AMEN! preach it sista.
** NICE
** MARIAH AN HER MOM...although i dont no them
butt bottom line iz ur absolutely rite an if i were u i wood hav gone all jackie chan on her **...jus imaginin ur description...an DAMN DAT GRLZ ANNOYIN...niwayz hope u stab her soon...lol an grate story im ttlly luvin it if ani1 complains bout ur oocness ** DEM dis story iz wicked awesome an doe let no ** LICKED person tell u no **...k babes
grate story continue da gud work an i ttly luv dis neji..*screams* perverty neji meks his cracter even SMEXIER...DAMN I WANT HIM
an GAARA how can i 4get u BABE
dese 2 hotties r MINE!
niwayz great story keep up da gud work,im at chptr 11 now so...lemme go read da odaz...l8a
an i apologize 4 ma FREnch!
DIS STORY KICKS **! WO! |
 Crimson.Kaze 2007-05-27 . chapter 14GaaSaku! |
 voodoodollie 2007-05-03 . chapter 6 Ohmy god you freakin ROCK! This is one of the funniest Naruto fics ive ever read. And the way you depicted Gaara and Neji, makes them even Hotter than usual. ahaha!I love the skittles part, and the issue about Neji lookin more like a woman than Sakura. ahah! Keep up the good work! |
 Princess Kairi98 2007-03-14 . chapter 1This is a great story! |
 Masume Tsubaki 2007-03-10 . chapter 14I think Sakura should end up with Neji. Haku is just creepy. |
 Kunoichi Sabaku no Gaara 2007-01-06 . chapter 14omg u finally came up with a chaptr
im dissapointed u made (my) gaara out as a sissy in love with skittles, plz change imediately
like always, tho, u had me ROTFLMAO
im very proud of u
an i kno im late but plz pair her with gaara
the dead sexy part was wat really got me going, and the part involvin the fruits an stuff
keep up the good work and u bettr update |