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| henred5 2006-08-26 ch 6,  | abuseWell Auska is gonna have one big bill on her credit card I'm guesing. lol ~henred5~ |
| Aimi Niji 2006-08-21 ch 6, | abuseI was for sure they would not get out thank goodness they did :D |
| Wait-For-Sleep 2006-08-20 ch 6, | abusei like this! hah that was funny when Asuka said she was Hwoa's gf. I would like this a lot more if Julia wasnt Hwoarangs gf and it was Asuka instead, but hey, its your story and I'll keep reading anyway, so well done :D |
| Aimi Niji 2006-08-02 ch 5, | abuseI like this story I hope everybody lives update. |
| NCTeKkEn08 2006-08-02 ch 5, | abuseYou updated! Yay! I was so happy to see that it was updated. This was a great chapter. It was perfect when they started to fight the gunmen, you gave a lot of great details and I was on the edge of my seat the whole time. I hope Julia is okay and is just knocked out, and even more I hope Xiao is okay. I can't believe she survived having one of those poles fall on her when she's so small. Great Chapter! |
| henred5 2006-08-02 ch 5, | abusenice chapter!! Just a shame Xiao didn't notcie the pole would hit her... |
| LionheartvsOmnislash 2006-05-24 ch 4, | abuseHwoarang?! He rocks my socks...but in Japanese pop culture, why do Korean dudes always have red hair? |
| nice 2006-05-10 ch 1, anon. | abusethis is good and i dont say that about any fic |
| InfinitiveEvil101 2006-05-07 ch 4, | abuseWow! This went from bad to worse really quickly! Hope they all make it... |
| henred5 2006-05-06 ch 4, | abusewell in this case Eavesdropping NEARLY saved some lives. i hope Xiao and Jin don't get hurt by the blast. |
| Thee Slushee 2006-05-06 ch 4, | abuseOMG OMG OMG! Whyd u have to leave it there? It was just getting exciting! Well, it cant end right here, Jin and Xiao HAVE to live thru it! I so cant wait to find out what happens next! |
| NCTeKkEn08 2006-05-05 ch 4, | abuseWow, these people have no mercy. I hope they'll ( the group ) be able to get out okay. Great Chapter! |
| InfinitiveEvil101 2006-05-02 ch 3, | abuseThis was my favorite chapter so far. Xiao and Jin are so good together and I hope that Hwoarang will become more open to Asuka's advances soon, cause I don't think the message is getting to him. Can't wait for the dance! Also there was a typo earlier in the chapter 'intrest' should've been 'interested'. It's easy to see how you could've missed that. |
| InfinitiveEvil101 2006-05-02 ch 2, | abuseAw, I thought this was cute! And I like the pairing of Asuka and Hwoarang since they seem to have more in common with each other than him and Julia. Not so sure about Jin and Hwoarang being cool with each other, but I'm sure they could work it out. |
| InfinitiveEvil101 2006-05-02 ch 1, | abuseI love how Jin and Xiaoyu have a love/kinda love relationship! And what could Jin have possibly done to upset anyone? |