im welling up so badly reading this, uve reduced me to tears seriously.

*resists urge to cry* or else evry1 will wonder why im crying at half 1 in the morning.

this series is beautiful. only word for it.

take a bow ppl this is amazing.

Cool. I don't really have much to say to expand on that but I really like the story and how its moving along so quickly (short attention span). I only wish you would put all of the story together into a chapter fic.

And you mande me cry - again! Not that it's truly difficult, mind you... But that was another good chapter. The characters' feelings were truly realist and well-written, I could feel Genma and Raidou's pain like they were my own... Thanks a lot for the good reading

absolutely loved it! Genma is so sad in this one! I'm going to go read the next ones right now!!

ah Genma is so cute!

Loved it. I don't think he was too whiney at all, i thought you did an excellent job showing what genma was going through, anger, depression, etc. everything was done nicely. loved kotetsu and izumo in this too! definatley going on my favorites!

WOW! this is great!

THAT IS SO SWEET! It's cute how they help each other and everything, though I was kinda put out that Raidou had to take so long to come back in, but I guess he needed to sort everything out. So are they best friends, lovers, what?

This is great, and I'm really learning about the characters! This also gives the whole shinobi-are-humans-too vibe with Genma being cripple and healing and being depressed. You don't get much about Genma and Raidou in the series so I'm surprised you protray them so well! You have some of the best characterization skills I've ever read! Please continue, I know I'll keep reading!

Yay ! I'm so happy you made a sequel ! And I'm very glad Raidou finally made his mind ! And by the way, trust me, Genma isn't too whiny, I thinks everyone in his case would be angry and ready to just let drow himself.
Thanks for sharing !

amazing!! im still crying!
can't wait for the next ones!

Argh! I want the next installment now! Okay, enough of that demanding ('bad SW, bad' :slaps hand:) So amazingly well written. I'm an absolute fan of this series and will most definately read any future additions, whenever they happen to be posted.

Wind to thy wings!

~SW