aw I love this story and you kept it very in character ^^. favourites!

*tears in eyes*
Damn hay fever... XD jk

I really like this story! It really beautifully (and cursingli as is Rin's nature) describes Rin's hurt. though Rin doesn't know Akito is a woman so that was a bit weird...

I like! :)

i really loved that and i think it should beautifully what rin really feels. It's great!

So sweet and tragic! I have a Rin oneshot too.
Haha... well done.