I think you should write the story however you find most comfortable for you. I wouldn't mind either way...

But I'm a bit worried when I see that you haven't updated in a couple years... but yet you have written another story this year... so at least your still writing something.

but please PLEASE finish this story I'm begging you!

I absolutely love it!

You are an annoying disembodied voice that is squatting in my head.

xD

omg I loved that line so much!!

ah heck, last update 2006? are you continuing this? i've just come across and liked it so much. especially the part where Riku was held captive, trying to escape first time and got a spear thrown inches from his face. also his interaction with roxas was just awesome.

and the line like "he stood with shadows of 2 people he loved most, but he's something worse" impressed me.

i hope you continue.

Man I love this story!...It took me a while to finally go and read this story but not bad!! I got to say I'm enjoying this! You so need to update!!

First-Person? Hey, whatever helps you write faster. I just can't get enough of this!

Hi!

The story so far is very good.It's rare to find a good story with a good plot nowadays.Many authors have a tendency to write short smutty oneshots.Not that I'm complaining. :) But it's really refreshing to read something well-written.
Do you plan to write story in different FPOV?Honestly, I think that it's not that important as long as your story is good and you UPDATE REGULARLY.

You live! ^_^ I thought you had stopped or something, but somehing kind of told me you were just busy! I'm glad your back! Eh... Schoolwork sucks! And I'm in highschool so I'm pretty sure you got it worse than me in college! I wish you lots of luck though! I feel really bad for Roxas in this though. Poor kid. Well, Riku... He begged. Can't believe it. xD ^_^ But I'm glad he did something to help wake Sora up. I really can't wait for your next chapter. But I wanted to know,are Riku and Sora gonna meet each other soon or do I have to wait a while? xD Anyway, glad your still writing!

eeK! I really like your writing style. I finished 'DarkSide' and immediately came to read this one. It's really good!

Lmao. Wonderful chapter as always! Your one of the few people who can write stories that I can read. I know school and everything has been time consuming and I'm kinda suffering from freshman year of highschol, it's like BOOM! In your face your not a kid anymore and you have loads of work. I don't have time to do things anymore so since your in college you must have less time than I do... So, yeah I get why it takes so long to update!:D But still I feel bad for Riku he's like the one suffering the most. He had to go through everything with his feelings all hidden up and man looking like ansem would be a mental breaking for me so I'm surprised how Riku took it. But anyway, great chapter and take your time on updating!

Great story. Keep up the good work!

xD Glad your computers alive! I like this chapter, same as always it was another wonderful chapter! :D Poor Roxas... More importantly poor Riku... I would hate to look like Ansem and you sure do know how to tie all the ends in Kingdom Hearts together! xD At least you have a scanner xD My sisters broke a long time ago so I can never ever ever upload a picture again... Plus, I came back from Las Vegas just today and well... I ruined my beautiful sketches in my sketchpad... xD Anyway, I'm ranting I hope you update soon! And why in the world don't these people review... I mean I love your story! -squeals- Ranting again anyway update when you get the chance! Love you's! xD

Lol... I know how you feel... Even if I am a slow updater and I get SO many views I get very very few reviews... I mean it's not even funny... xD Okay, so it's a bit funny too me... But I love your story alot and I hope you don't stop! I'm so absorbed in this story! Two jobs, eh? That must suck...To bad I'm to young to get a job! xD Anyway, I hope Riku ends up finding Roxas soon enough and kicking Axels' **... Poor Riku he should get lil ol' Sora back! Or Roxas... Either way, both pairings seem wonderful! Please, please don't let this ficcie die! Anyway, beautiful chapter like always! Update after work? xD

Omg... You do not know how much I love your story! It's so awesome! C'MON PPL REVIEW YOU KNOW YOUR WANT TOO YOU LAZY PEOPLE! Anyway, poor Roxas and Riku.. Riku should kick Axel in the ** I swear... Now, that I've read your fanfic I kinda like the Riku/Roxas pairing, but Riku/Sora still my number one pairing! Still, update soon, love youe fic!

My internet broke. (cries) But I put a bandaid on my computer, and now it works!
(I wish that was all I had to do, I had to wait for my dad to call the computer fix-y people)((It was so tragic.))(right...)

Riku/Roxas is hot.
I don't really look or it though, it's just kinda there. (And it's damn pretty)