Very cute. I liked it and was frankly more satisfied with this story than many other fanfics I've read with their whole life afterward. Good job!

Aww!! So sweet!

Oh, yay! Merry... Whatever Day it is, I'm sure It's a holiday somewhere or someone's b-day! Luved it!

the style and idea was GREAT, but the dialouge was a bit silly, and i kept getting distracted by the way that it seemed to modern remember, this is in 1688

heheh I have to read this book for english class and I "accidentally" read ahead (but I only read the exciting parts with John, Will, and Nat in them...LOLZ)

This was good and cute and nice, but I just wished that it could have the same details that the original author had took time to write, but it would be hard to follow her style so I can't blame you.

I blame the cookies...

Anyway, good job! ^_^

-Keiko Neko ~mya~

lol, cute^^
~arya minato and itachi

I luv it! It's really cute. Isn't it funny that there aren't very many WOBBP fanfics? You should write more, because the whole reason that you wrote the story was to continure the book!

-computerzandbks4ever

I didn't really like it. I would have liked it if you showed Nat and Kit asking her uncle if they could marry because that was what they were heading there to do

This was nicely written.

AWESOME! I TOTALLY LUVED IT! except one thing...
why would kit tell everyone that they were gonna get married if they didn't talk it over? but anyways, it was totally awesome!

you should have continued.
=] this is one of my favorite books and
yeah should make a chapter 23 !

it's just soo aww!

LOL.
I wasn't expectin it to happen like that.

OMG...I love it...I really do.

That was just lovely!
I absolutely loved it!