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ChestnutBrumby
2007-01-13
ch 2,
abuse-dies laughing- Raiden drawing on everyone's face... priceless!
ChestnutBrumby
2007-01-13
ch 1,
abuseThat was really awesome! I laughed a ton at Sonya maiming all the men from labor pains, and Johnny is wonderfully in character! Great work!
Baroness Bones
2007-01-07
ch 2,
abuse:(

When will you update DOTR and Rat Pack? Is the story cancelled? ;_;
Oracle Thunder
2006-07-10
ch 4,
abuseOh well, all good things have to end sometime. This is a funny story btw. Apple mayonaise cheesecake? Yuck! Thanks for including Rayden too.
Shotokan
2006-07-08
ch 4,
abuseHm I'd like to see Sindel and the grand child in this but it's your story! Seems a lot easier to pair Johnny and Sonya because Sonya's stubborn and headstrong, and Johnny's arogant and foolish :P lol. Mine is mostly smart-** comments (apologies for the slight language.) Sad to hear coming to an end but I'm glad to hear you're going to complete it =) Go you!
MowsysWrath
2006-07-07
ch 4,
abuseSindel... i take it as a rename of her grandma! Erm... thats going by the movies. I also liek to think Raiden's voice is that from Mortal Kombat 1 (the movie) because they did some actor swtiching in Annihilation. Sonya and Raiden switched. They were my 2 favortie because of the smart-assish attitude Sonya had and the simply awesome raspyness in Raiden's. But enough of that, i will wait for an update. This has grabbed my intrest, and is actually pretty funny. I hope to see another thing with Raiden and his crAaYzy AntIcs!1!1!one!!1
MowsysWrath
2006-07-07
ch 2,
abuseWell, those two chapters are nice. I'm happy to see Sub-Zero playing a nice part, and Raiden being a fun-filled thunder god. Kinda out of character, but very awesome. I like it.
Kitsu Kurasei
2006-07-06
ch 4,
abuseHehe, you never finish your stories. Someone think Crash Course for just a moment.

Pacd du oy (Best to ya),

Kitsu.
Kitsu Kurasei
2006-06-11
ch 3,
abuseWhat did he say to Sonya Saggy? P.S. What IS with you and Dinner Dates?

Best to ya,

Kitsu. (P.S. If you don't see me for extended periods of time, I'm sick and my computer's dead.)
Oracle Thunder
2006-06-09
ch 3,
abuseOh poor Johnny and Jax. They were just trying to help. Funny chapter. I don't mind the name change at all either. Hope Rayden is in the next chapter.
Baroness Bones
2006-06-09
ch 3,
abuseAha! I knew you'd give in! Bwahahahaha!

Oh wait...I should be studying...

You never saw me, and I was never here no matter what says...yes.

[[Great chapter :) I'll be waiting patiently for an update -or rather I'll have to wait since finals are still going on- later! ]]
Shotokan
2006-05-19
ch 1,
abuseThis story is hilarious! This is a good story! Very well done! I think I've read this and another where Johnny and Sonya have a child, but there both good! Very funny! Update more! I'm quite intrigued by your story =)
Ghost Zero
2006-05-18
ch 2,
abuseGlad to see you added another chapter. Keep updating!
Baroness Bones
2006-05-18
ch 1,
abuseAww I loved this little one shot (or is a two-shot now?) -shrug-

Since I am aware that my jokes are lame I'll spare you the torture since:

1. I like you
2. You're a FANTASTIC writer.
3. ... I HAVE CHESE! -victory dances-

Back to the topic...I'm a strong Sonya/Johnny shipper so I bet you can imagine how happy I am (especially since this well written, did I mention that?)

Meh - enough mandearing conversation. Please say you'll consider on turning this into a little mini-series? :( *pouty poout* Pretty please? I'll give you a muffin! (we can discuss shipment later)

Lufferz from Al :P
Oracle Thunder
2006-05-01
ch 1,
abuseOh oh this was so funny! I absolutely loved it.
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