I hope so very, very much that you continue this one day. There aren't enough older!Ed/Roy fics out there. I read a lot of Roy/Ed, but there are very few that convince me about a relationship between them when Ed is 15/16, especially one that is instantly True Love. Sorry, but that is still a child, and without even touching on the morality of it, what adult seriously wants a relationship with someone that young?

I love all of the detail about the people he met in the other world you include. This also seems to be rich in plot, although there is a lot of it that is just beginning to develop. I really enjoy the way you slowly developed the attraction between them, from the affection that really is canon it grows very plausibly. Please think about returning to this story! Thanks for writing such great fic.

OMG! It's hot, it had a plot, and it's so interesting... I love it! ^^

Oh no, how could you leave it like that? Just as it was getting good!

This story is completely awesome, I'm devastated that it won't, in all likelihood, be continued.

Still, I don't understand people who won't read WIPs, because I would much rather read a wonderful, unfinished fic (like this) than not read it at all.

Great job :)

Hey, you haven't updated this in a long time and I was wondering if you were ever going to...?

Nice Roy, Very Nice. Lol. Can't wait for an update!

Ohh things are about to get interesting.

Well can't say I'm phyched about Ed being a father...but okay!

Enough with the sadness! You're making me cry!

Is this story being continued?

This is a beautiful story! Well-written and you handle the characters wonderfully!

Please update. It has been a while since you've posted, but I hope that you do soon. I can't wait to read how this ends.

love it

Quite an awkward predicament Roy's gotten himself into. I mean, Ed had a wife and now has a daughter. xD
And I can't help but feel sad that Al and Ed have drifted over the years.. ):

But besides that, great story! It's very original and interesting. :D

this is SUCH a great idea for a story! i love how they arent rushing into a relationship, but building from friendship. pretty realistc- just my cup of tea! i cant wait to see what happens.

This is the most believable fic i have ever read. It's written so well, it seems like a natural continuation of the story.

Please please update soon i can't stand waiting.

This is the most believable fic i have ever read. It's written so well, it seems like a natural continuation of the story.

Please please update soon i can't stand waiting.