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nekozr
2008-04-19
ch 7,
abusemore i went to know what happen betwing(sp?)Naiteki,Shukaku,and Kyuubi plz!
nekozr
2008-03-17
ch 8,
abuseMORE!PLZ!
!
BloodxMoonxNightmare
2008-03-12
ch 8,
abuseoh ** they're gunna bust a cap in his **! update soon please!

-darkness
Pochi Saku-Hime
2008-02-15
ch 8,
abuseI'LL KILL YOU! lol lol
swepy14
2008-02-12
ch 8, anon.
abuseso is sasuka going to oricmaru for power is he going to go to the akuast also the akstua going be in it
HarunoSakura13
2008-02-09
ch 7,
abuseAWSOME chapter!
HarunoSakura13
2008-02-09
ch 8,
abuseThis was such a good story! I can't wait for chapter 9 to come! You're a very talented writer!
Kyuubi Shiori-Chan
2008-02-07
ch 7,
abuseOkay im still lubin' this story. But i heard people say they wanted a NaruSaku so that Kyuubi and Naiteki can get together, So I do want SasuSaku NaruHina but I also want KyuuNai so i kinda thought that they could be released, but they are bound to Sakura and Naruto and must be in their human form. Just a suggestion...sorry if you dont like when people do this. I'm not exactly the best person in the world ^^ but I am the smexyest jkjk! Later, Lub you (sorry but my review is not COMPLETE without that...i dunno why hm...whatev!)

Lub (se),
Shiori-Chan
dictator panda-chan
2008-02-06
ch 8, anon.
abusegah! so evil! T.T update update update please!! its super good!
Kyuubi Shiori-Chan
2008-01-21
ch 8,
abuseNO! -falls to knees- SAKURA!

S'okay I know she's not dead! Anyway, is this going to be a SasuSaku, NaruHina thing? Plz tell me it will be! I LUB THOSE PAIRINGS! Pz Update real soon, i love this story!

Lub,
Shiori-Chan
xOxDragonsRainxOx
2008-01-10
ch 8, anon.
abuseThat chapters so sad!
I almost cried :(
The story's quite good but isn't the romance going a bit fast?
meh. . I can't wait for the next chapter!
KelseysMahName
2008-01-01
ch 8, anon.
abuseThe overall story was nice, but I think you should make a different situation for the story arc, it's because the story line is a be repetitive, a little unpredictable though due to some changes to the charaters (and Sai being there ahaha). Its nice though :3.
Sukia and Kaiya
2007-12-03
ch 8,
abuseUPDATE! please?...
Funabisenu
2007-12-03
ch 8,
abuseI LOVE IT! i cried when she "died"! please update!
Lilli
2007-11-28
ch 8, anon.
abuseOMG! i love this story! please say youre going to update it!
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