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| JadedOne47 2007-08-16 ch 1, | abuseI LOVED it.. Haven't checked for a sequel yet, but so am hoping there is. Keep it up. |
| Queen of the Shadylands 2007-03-18 ch 1, | abuseJayne is going to that special place. Yep that sounds like it could be Jayne to me. The only thing that would stop the others killing Jayne would be River, otherwise I don't think he has got much of a chance with her. Well written and enjoyable. |
| Scifi-warper 2006-07-17 ch 1, | abuseLOL. I like it. It doesn't take much to read Jayne, but when River does it, you can see just how well she does it. Not that statement made any sense, whatsoever. Anyway. Good story. Loved River's smart alex style! |
| Lattelady 2006-05-29 ch 1, | abuseVery nicely done! River has so got the upper hand. |
| Goomba 2006-05-27 ch 1, | abuseRiver is so hard because she is soo young, and even though I thought I had problems with her and Jayne it only makes sense. And how you've written this story has just convinced me that it does really work. Thank you and very VERY well done. Cheers and keep it up Jen |
| erinmarie5 2006-05-23 ch 1, | abuse"Of course, you could go all Oatie bar on their asses, and get us out of here sooner though." you know, its funny; I just heard this phrase for the first time yesterday, and now I'm seeing it everywhere! :o) though I'm so not a Rayne shipper, this was very cute! |
| Sam-Cooke 2006-05-02 ch 1, | abuseBest story I've seen all day (out of 4 stories). I love this idea though. |
| LittleFreda 2006-05-02 ch 1, | abuseTwo words: Awesome Sauce. Um...more please? |
| Dina C. 2006-05-01 ch 1, | abuseLots of fun. I hope there's more chapters to come? :) |
| hazelmom 2006-04-30 ch 1, | abuseThis story is wonderful. I have just begun to read R/J fanfiction and yours is some of the best. If you can recommend any other authors, please let me know. sheila |
| avaleighfitzgerald 2006-04-30 ch 1, | abusehehe, i love when he's too slow! You totally captured jayne, 'specially at the end. I really enjoyed reading that! Ava |