This story literally brought tears to my eyes. Good work!

I'm not that into Labyrinth fics (only read a handful of them), but I think you did this pretty IC. It seems extremely sappy and angsty, though.. but that's pretty much it's only fault. :)

*sniff* oh! so sad!

but it was meant to be. I don't know that anyone could really go Underground and be truly happy.

unfortunately, it was only a matter of time before something like this happened.

wow that's really depressing but beautifully written

This was very good...very sad...but very good. Me like!

*wibbles* very sweet. I loved it Rikki. I started laughing when I read the other guy's name because Liam is my little brother's little name and I often tease him and call him Liam-to annoy him .

Very well done

*takes out napkin* Although I'm not much of a Labyrinth fan, I can say that I very much enjoyed this. I enjoyed the way your portrayed his and her emotions (though I still liked Jareth more...I feel sorry for the way it all ended between them!