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| Fiery Dragon164 2008-08-30 ch 10,  | abuseI like this story. |
| romanceaddict3320 2008-07-12 ch 10, | abusewow this was really good. i'm not a big fan of ones where they aren't who they are on the show but this was really good. i know that u stopped writing 4 it a long time ago but i would love it if u would write another act. :) please think about it! |
| noname00 2007-09-15 ch 3, anon. | abusemy first speedrae fic and im enjoying it though i have to continue this another time^^ |
| Novocain 2007-08-22 ch 1, | abuseLord, are you underage or something? Never Have I Ever is a drinking game - you take a shot or sip every time you've done the Never. Anyways, I love your stories, especially your Red/Rae ones. Very pretty. |
| S.H.Nina 2007-07-14 ch 10, | abuseWOOT. I loved it. : ) |
| S.H.Nina 2007-07-14 ch 5, | abuseOMGSH I JUST NOTICED SOMETHING! Gahh, I'm freaking out now. Okay, so Mark Chior = Malchior. Am I right? And I'm thinking Mike is Gizmo. Ack, it's all too much! ((hyperventilates)) Mk, moving on... : ) |
| S.H.Nina 2007-07-13 ch 4, | abuseLoved seeing Kitten in there; I'd nearly forgotten about her. ^_^ I'm still wondering about this Mark guy, though... is he based off someone? I'm trying to figure it out. =/ : ) |
| S.H.Nina 2007-07-13 ch 1, | abuseWow. Normally I avoid AUs, but I really like this one thus far. Only thing that confused me at first was I had to guess who some of the people were. -.- I know, I know. ((sheepish grin)) I've got them all figured now, though. The one that confused me the most was Garth- he's Aqualad, correct? Anyway, just thought I'd send in my thoughts before continuing. : ) |
| Toran of Raysed 2007-05-02 ch 1, | abuseTechnically you're supposed to take a shot of whiskey or some other liquer, but we eon't get technical. |
| VoiletDhaliwal 2006-12-28 ch 10, | abuseHey is this the last chapter? |
| Tuli-Susi 2006-12-23 ch 2, | abusehmm...what does Raven feel for Roy? i think it's typical and totally ic hat only Garth noticed something |
| the. wilted. flower 2006-12-22 ch 10, | abuseThat wasn't an ending! You need to add more! |
| darkmistress in the shadows 2006-12-22 ch 10, | abuseAre you done with the story? It was good though. I like Raven confronting her father, very intense. |
| loney 2006-12-18 ch 9, anon. | abusethat was cool |
| LM22102 2006-12-08 ch 9, | abuseMy hands are trembling to exit this small review window and go back to your profile, but I thought that I do owe you a review. Good God. This is well written, well placed, and the concept is gorgeous. As I don't let shippings cloud my judgement in stories, I usually read what is great. And darling, this is great. Better, that, though I'm not a basher, not a BBxRae fiction, magnificently better, that it's RoyxRaven. Harper has always been one of my favorites, as is Raven. I have relished and enjoyed in this. Really. I can honestly say that you have such great potential, as this story also does. The only critique I have is that I felt a bit irked at Raven's excessive 'I should leave now. I'm his daughter. I'm horrible. You don't want me.' It was a bit much. Yes, I know, her character as that within her, but I felt as if you put TOO much. Also, I had a bit of a problem after learning that she fought off her father's assassins by herself, but not with Mark Choir. But I have excused that with emotional scarring and she was temporarily frozen. =) Thank you, really. Fair wishes with your update. Don't hurry. |